Gelphie fluff. Really intense Gelphie.

Well, its not that the concept isnt good its just that your use of tenses and articles makes the story feel really clumsy and it breaks the reality. Its to the degree that I was certain english isnt your first language.

Some parts of it were a bit confusing but overall I loved it. I think it would even better with more context, like if you more in depth story about Glinda going back in time and their relationship starting.

For a first time smut it is decent hehe. I remember writing smut for the first time...I let a porno inspire me hehe...