Reviews for A Final Act Of Love
Hazlenut Lovage chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
Omg... That was so sad! I frickin cried my heart out for Discord! Why couldn't you let him live!? It was a good tearjerker nonetheless.
random fuest chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
i wonder what it would be like to fight tirek? well it would probably go something like this: I was just walking around in a forest wondering where i am. Paradox:"okay seriously where the fuck am i."

I then stop talking as i hear what sounds like people fighting. I snap my fingers teleporting and find a unicorn with wings fighting a centaur.

Paradox:"oh that's just fucking great now i know i'm tripping on LSD."

lord tirek:"what sorcery is this? a two legged creature in a dress?"

Paradox:"for your information it's a suit you shitty attempt at making a demon."

lord tirek:"HOW DARE YOU! DIE"

lord tirek shoots a fireball at me, but i put a hand up and a barrier made of psychic energy blocks it. I then snap my fingers teleporting behind tirek and kicking him in the back of the head, knocking him away. Tirek roars as he gets back up and turns around before shooting a fireball at me, but i teleport before appearing in front of him.

Paradox:"HI!"

Tirek growls before attemping to backhand me but i dodge using my superior speed.
I then appear next to him as my hands glow yellow before rapid firing several laser beams at tirek, covering him in explosions. Tirek roars and rushes out of the smoke, charging at me. I jump into the air taking flight and look down at him. Tirek jumps into the air after me and shoots another fireball, but i put another force field up and block it, before teleporting away.

Tirek lands on the ground, causing a shockwave as he does, and looks around for his opponent. Minutes pass before i appear underneath him and punch him in the gut, knocking the wind out of him before i jump up and roundhouse kick knocking him away again. I then run towards him before grabbing him by one of his horns and throwing him away. Tirek gets up again and grabs me with his telekinesis. I then however cross my arms before shooting beams out of my eyes and hitting tirek in the face, causing him to lose his concentration as i fall to the ground. I then teleport in front of him again, but he reaches out with one of his hands and grabs me.

Paradox:"OH-FU"

Tirek slams me on the ground repeatedly before throwing me into the mountain behind him. For good measure he shoots several fireballs at the mountain, buring me in explosions and rubble. Tirek smirks and turns around to claim what is his, only to see me waving at him with a annoyed look on my face.

Paradox:"if you thought that killed me you're as stupid as you are weak."

Tirek growls and tries to attack again, but i raise a hand up and calmly say "psycho cut" as
a large cut appears on tirek. Tirek grunts before digging both his hands into the ground and picking up a large rock. He then throws the rock at me. I lift a hand up before firing a laser beam at the rock, turning it to dust. I take a few steps before running at tirek as fast as possible. Tirek copies my movements as i jump into the air and pull a fist back, he does as he well. We then swing our fists straight at each other causing shockwaves. I teleport behind tirek again and blast him at point blank range with a kamehameha, knocking him away. Tirek turns around just in time to see me jump up and kick him in the jaw, not only breaking it but knocking him onto his back.

Paradox:"jesus christ you're weak! well guess it's time to end this."

I point two fingers at tirek and fire frieza's signature technique the death beam at him, blowing a hole through one of his legs. I then do it again and again until he can barely stand. I then teleport in front of him and lightly bitch slap him, knocking him to the ground. My eyes glow white before i teleport and reappear in outer space looking down at the planet. I lift a hand up gathering massive amounts of energy and create a large sphere of fire the size of a football stadium.

Paradox:"ashes to ashes, dust to dust."

I then throw the fireball at the planet. It doesn't take long explodes in a bright flash.

Paradox:"well that was fun."

I then lift a hand up before tearing a hole in reality and going through it, causing me to end up in another dimension.
Fluttercord26 chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
This is so sad and awesome at the same time. I was wondering if I could right a fanfic based on this
httpkirby chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
... ?$&!*!
MarcelineFan chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Holy moly. This...this version of Discord was...wow. Just...headstrong, and selfless, and...loyal to the very end. I actually felt tears in my eyes. Well done my fellow writer. Well done indeed.
Sam Fraser chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
One in which Discord survives, albeit badly wounded, to be cared for by the Bearers?
Sam Fraser chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Could you do a happy ending version of this story based on your RP?
Sam Fraser chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
I almost cried
Sam F chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
I almost cried...
pastelvamp chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
I'm crying, but at the same time I'm really satisfied. This is exactly the sort of story I like to read. Heartless, I know. ;) BUT SERIOUSLY, IT WAS PERFECT.
Sheepz chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
This BEAUTIFUL fanfiction made me shed legitimate tears of sadness. R.I.P. Discord, you brave hero, you
Sand-wolf579 chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
Yay for Discord being a hero, and saving everybody. Not so much of a yay that he's dead. It's just so sad, but he was so brave. I would love to say more about how great this fanfic is, but it's hard to think when you're about to burst into tears.

It's kind of strange, an hour ago I was crying about the death of a magic sword, and now I'm crying because the death of a lord of chaos...Normal people would think me crazy for getting emotional about those things.

Anyways, the story was beautiful, nothing else needs to be said.
Snowfrost chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Oh sh*t! Are PERPOSLY trying to make me cry, because you're doing a good job at it! *sobs* THE FEELS, THE FEELS! Tireck, I, er *throws tireck figurine across room* sorry, got a LITTLE angry there.
BeautifulChaos2 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
To crush a SPIRIT to DEATH is an oxymoron. A spirit is either immortal and can't die or already dead. Boom.
JazzyCakes chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
I whimpered like a beaten puppy throughout this celestiaforsaken, BEAUTIFUL, story... Oh, Discord...
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