I am absolutely in love with this story please update soon!

sad. another avatar-worldtravel story were mc is not really involved/important.

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I love your story and i didnt mind the longer chaper it was great to read hope you keep updating

oh my god I have never commented on a story but this is legit so good please please come back

I am realllllly enjoying the story! I think you have him spot on. I think wishy washy is okay because throughout the three seasons I always felt like Zuko went back and forth and back and forth until literally like the second to last episode. So it makes sense that one minute they're buddy buddy and the next he's being a dick. Which he TOTALLY was in this chapter. But he's usually a brat anyway so it's all good. I love your sense of humor and I found myself laughing numerous times throughout the story. I look forward to the next chapter!

like this story so far but i have one question is rachelle a bender or non-bender

Awesome chapter! I find both of their sarcasm extremely funny! Can't wait for next chapter!

Usually I hate this kind of stories. There are just so many that aren't written good. Your story started off on a rocky slow start but I am enjoying your story. I like that Rachelle isn't a bender and she didn't lose her memory so she wasn't lying, she consciously lying about her past. I think you are close on Zuko as much as a person can be. He has to be of the hardest characters to write. But I've grown very attached to this story.

I barely started reading this Category about 2days ago but I really enjoy this book. I'm so in love with the character and how she's with Zuko . Update soon I'm very excited about it especially cause there aren't a lot of books I like in this category of Avatar

Awh I love this story so flipping much!

Will you please continue?

Thanks :) plus I'm curious why she heals so fast

God, your story is just so cute. I love Rachelle, and I pronounce her name like 'ra-shell' even though I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be Rachel.

At the beginning I loved her interactions with the Gaang, especially how she and Sokka didn't really understand each other at first and had to work at their friendship. I really hope she and Aang get to develop a stronger sibling relationship, cos that boy needs a big sister. Gosh, just little moments between her and Katara too, like the "you liiiiiike him" moment in the Imprisoned episode/chapter. It's all amazing! You write them all with the complexity of real people and it's so compelling, it's fun to watch it unfold.

I love the progression you've shown of her training, first with the Kyoshi warriors, then with Sokka, and then with Iroh. Will she and Zuko ever train or spar together? Could have some cutesy awkward moments in there, because cliches are fun. And I know she can't bend, but part of me is hoping the ability comes out of nowhere for her in the future, just cos it's a dream to bend an element and, well it's just fun and cool and it'd be so awesome for her, ha ha!

Since there's been more time to develop it in the story, I guess it's not surprising that my favourite interactions are between Rachelle and the members on Zuko's ship. Not just her and Iroh or her and Zuko, although the former is just so wonderfully father - daughter esque and the latter is adorable, but with all the crewmembers too. Keeping my hopes held out for more Chey, they could be bffs. Maybe another music night, get Zuko playing that tsungi horn.

Not gonna lie, part of me wishes that Rachelle's burn didn't heal completely. I know this mysterious healing factor is an important plot point, and I'm super curious and excited for more hints about that, but the burn would've been a great device. A reminder to Rachelle that she can't play with people and that this world is really dangerous and that even 'good' people can be really shitty. Gosh, so much guilt for Zuko, too. Though I suppose it would've been harder for their adorable feelings for each other to move around that obstacle so fast. But jfc, when she's reunited with the Gaang, if she had a gnarly burn scar? How would they all have reacted? How would it affect their relationships with Rachelle? How would it alter the season 3 Zuko redeption?

I'm so happy that Rachelle is completely aware of her crush and isn't ridiculously oblivious. I mean that device works sometimes, but Rachelle seems like the type to know when she's got feelings for a hottie. Watching them get closer and become less volatile around each other is sweet and fun and cute, and I'm so excited to see how their relationship goes from here. Especially with that necklace!

I just have so many questions! How was Rachelle sent to the Avatar-verse? Why was she sent? Why does she heal so fast? Is it because time in her universe moves faster than in ATLA and that's why it seems so fast (my theory, lol, not that it makes much sense )? You've given us so many mysteries! !

I'm super excited to see what happens next, but obviously real life is a bitch sometimes so it makes so much sense if you don't update for a while. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing your story with us! I wish you well!

Omg! The main character's name is so similar to mine! Raychelle