| Reviews for You've been Ambrosed |
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Isaiah Rocha chapter 20 . 6/16 This definitely was and is a really good book I enjoyed reading this book from the very beginning to the very end all of this book caught my attention and had me intrigued not to mention of course how OC is more terrifying than the older brother that is funny along with most of this book I was laughing by some of the things that were funny either way I cant wait to read more of ur books here with hopefully more books of either Randy Orton as the love interest or some more of Jonathan Good aka Dean Ambrose would love to read more books of him could do one of his time in the indies where meets OC and they get together and both travel and of course OC supports Jonathan Good on his dream/ goal of being a wrestler or something like that also think that u would do great in Wattpad where u could write ur books and have plenty of people read them since this book was really good and interesting not to mention the title and love interest being Jonathan Good got me interested and intrigued along with OC being a sports injury doctor and had three clients that she managed hope u do write and can make ur books on Wattpad while also make some here think be a good idea if u do be sure to follow me that way i can get chance to read more of ur books my name on Wattpad is isaiah_97 |
harper06 chapter 20 . 8/1/2018 I absolutely love this story! I hate to ask, but do you have any plans for a sequel? |
alexisrawrs chapter 20 . 1/28/2017 I absolutely adored reading this story! You are an amazing writer! |
Shaeya Sedjet chapter 17 . 12/8/2016 Best chapter ever! In college, my circle used to sleep in puppy piles. |
MsConCon chapter 20 . 9/7/2016 Oh my...flippin Jesus! I am ashamed it has taken me this long to come across this story! Like what in the actual hell?! Dude this was pure genuisness. Your OC was wonderfu! Perfectly built and sound and real. Feisty woman that Sydney is! Woman was passionate about what she believed in and how she felt and she loved like no one's business. The relationships in here were gorge. It was so apparent from the start that Dean was already hooked. She threw that line out a long time ago and reeled that sucker in. God they were amazing together. Their sex was just...unf. And I love how someone so strong put so much trust in someone else and they fell. Jon's line about letting him keep her made me tear up each and every time he used it. Like dude...you have her. You totally do. You also had amazing humor in this. Omg. I'm laughing at Randy asking why John is always around and oh my god, Colby and his vibrator stuff with Sydney earlier in the story and his squealing...I just can't. The McDonald's bit! There is just too much to touch on and if I try this will end up being twenty pages too long and you don't need that. lol. She had a special relationship with each and every one and I couldn't be any happier. It was too cute how she was mama bear and Roman papa bear. Had so much "family" and they all felt the same. -Sighs- But...can I go back to how Jon needed to be around her all the time and pull her over and there will be no more checking out of other dudes and just all around hooked dude...like legit sprung! Him talking so much during their first romp had me rollin! And the guys laughing and dying out in the living area of the hotel. Omg...Your Kitty...Just all of it. It was amazing. You have built a masterpiece here! I am so sorry it took me so long to get to it but boy am I glad I found it! I need to check out more of your works because if you had me laughing and sniffling and grinning from this one I am bound to fall in love with your other works. Omg dude...Just wow. I bow and applaud you. This was too good! |
Pinayprincesa chapter 20 . 8/31/2016 YAY! Everything was written beautifully especially the birth of little Joseph. FINALLY Jon, Syd, and the baby make 3 and their big family added in the mix was just PERFECT! |
DeeMarie426 chapter 20 . 8/31/2016 Well, glad the pregnancy went well, and everything worked out. |
Insane Cali Gurl chapter 20 . 8/31/2016 That has to be one of the more amazing endings to a story that I've read in a long time! They definitely need to have more babies! DEFINITELY! I thoroughly enjoyed this from beginning to end! Can't wait to see what else you've got in that brain of yours girl! |
Dawnie7 chapter 20 . 8/30/2016 It's absolutely insane what perfect timing you have. I've had a crappy two days so to open up my mail today and have this update waiting for me practically sent me into Snoopy dances. The near nuclear fall out from missing the breakfast hours at McDonalds was above and beyond the laugh I needed. That was sheer awesomeness. Then I was full on open water works during the delivery. The pacing of this chapter was perfect. The way you went over the span of a little over a year, highlighting the big spots but not lingering too long to make it feel too drawn out but also not feeling like you missed anything. Incredible blend. And the visuals it showcased, the wedding, birth, small moments within the family, you hit every note. It was so beautiful that the whole family got to be there, for both big moments. Such a great way you Incorporated Joe's suspension. It is amazing the clear change motherhood has brought upon Syd. Still tough as nails, but yeah, you can definitely see the calmness she now possesses. ' I love you, Syd. Please let me keep you./ I love you, Syd. Are you sure I can keep you? ' You just had to throw that in one last time, didn't you :) I had just finally stopped crying from meeting baby Joey too. But hey, who am I trying to kid? I wouldn't it or want it any other way. I don't know what else I could possibly say. You rock. You're the shit. I bow down to you and your utter and limitless talent and genius. And for the record, the star of this story really just might be Colby's brilliant imitation of a vibrator! |
NESSAANCALIME6913 chapter 20 . 8/30/2016 Sad it's over but so happy to be able to read this over and over again now that it is! You did a fantastic job on this. COngratulations and thank you. |
missabbylynn chapter 20 . 8/30/2016 I'm not ready for this story to end! I really love Jon and Syd! This story was so good, I really hope to read more from you in the future, sooner rather than later. I think I'm gonna have to go back and read this story again because I'm just not ready to give them up lol |
nattiebroskette chapter 20 . 8/30/2016 The feels! I wasn't ready... |
caz21 chapter 19 . 8/24/2016 I love this story it is great. |
Insane Cali Gurl chapter 19 . 8/5/2016 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! A little Good/Orton baby running a muck! Colby's reaction is priceless as always! Not really surprised Joe and Randy had bets going on with that one! LMFAO More soon PLEASE! |
Dawnie7 chapter 19 . 8/4/2016 ' "Why don't you ever go home?" ' ' "Why is he always here?" ' Aha! Oh my god it's so true isn't it? He's just always there, lingering around. I can't even begin to tell you how I could just gush and gush over this. I don't care how much of a dirty move it was, sending in the girls to work Syd over was sheer brilliance. Those two could take on the entire U.S Army, I believe that. The evolution of Syd and Randy's relationship has been incredible. It's great that they can take full advantage of their twin bond now and you can see how much Randy has grown. How both of them have grown. Your firm statements on family in all your stories just make me happy. Everything about this chapter, and of course the story in general is purely magical. |