Hey I wanted to let u know that u need to work on ur weighting a little (no offense). Also how u described those to OCs is just like Azuma and Zoncrow from Grimoire Hearts.

Pretty good all in all, I suppose.

Thxs ist amazing I llllooooovvvvveeeee it️️

Where the fck is happy like u even said Carla and Pantherlily but happy noooooo and like lector u were calling them drunker and something else to Lucy and boob queen and all those stuff now your saying y’all were really good friends and your gonna miss them MISS THEM lolollollolloll hhahaahahh

And how are u gonna make an angel fall for you sting (I know she’s not dead and the seven year loop da loop thingie)

Just love your grammar and spelling, just great!(It sucks ass, but really funny)

aaaaaaw soooo cuuteee

Damn perverts these days

Damn pervert Damn perverts these days

ITS WHEN NOT WEND WHEN

how can you have Natsu lose?

i like it but you have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes

plz update soon

I want Sting and Lucy be Mr. and Mrs. Eucliffe and son.

I would have loved the story more if the grammer was correct. It kinda makes it seem a 9 year old wrote the story.

I know this is bad and all... But it is when-not wend. Wend is like Wendy the girl. Not like "when should we do this."

Damn Sting is fast