Ooooh boooy. Poor Marco. It’s finally happening. I am sooo looking forward to next chapter. Poor Thatch was so sad and defensive

I think this is my favorite chapter so far it shows how Marco wants to be kind and help Thatch but is still struggling with his past.

Well damn Thatch is being a little shit

I like it, continue it, please.

Oh dear, here they go... I wonder how this will play out; will Marco not tolerate Thatch in the kitchen anymore when he's trying to cook or will Marco stop cooking altogether...? Or something else entirely...?

I find this extremely interesting and intriguing, though, seeing the ups and downs of their developing relationship and how they changed before they became what they were in the canon timeline.

Good job, I'm looking forward to seeing the fallout of this!

Poor stressed baby birb great chapter hon XD

Wow tysvm for the amazing chapter
Stay safe and healthy

Another amazing chapter, truly your words just showcase how deep poor Marco's trauma lies. Thatch seems like a brat, huh? I really like where you are going with the story. Keep it up!

I am SO excited for next chapters, I can't wait! This is really wholesome and amazing and we get to see so much of everyone and just UGH! Can't wait for updates

I don't know what to say except I like it

I really really love this story. Whenever you update it I can’t help but go back and re-read everything again. It is SO fun

I can't wait for Thatch to be frustrated that they keep finding him even if it's in such a small boat

Oh goodness, poor Thatch! paranoid bby XD great chapter hon XD

Hi, I am here too... Sorry for the bother, but this fic is amazing. You know what happened with the other one, I terrorize(?)d, well put a bunch of comments there. Thats not really sane. I know.
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But marco is smiling here and he smiles beautifully, I can't ignore that. And pops is so proud having this improvement moments... I love them. This is amazingly heartbreaking and touching. Good luck with your exam class and works.. you can update whenever you're ready. I will reread everything every words (is that creepy?) Because it makes me happy already soo thank you for that

Thatch! Well, I just wanted you to know that this story has replaced canon. Sorry, Oda, but you’ve been overthrown by a fanfiction writer. Marco is just so good. Everything is perfect. Perfect mix of sass, badassery, trauma, and sweet moments.

Please never stop writing for this fandom!