| Reviews for Immortal |
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Bb34 chapter 1 . 7/29 I loved reading this (*3)/ |
Salt On Snails chapter 1 . 5/18 Aghh! This and one of the best Harry Potter Twilight crossovers I have ever read. Definitely recommend it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 I LOVVVVE IT |
Jazzi Mercenia chapter 1 . 3/24/2019 With Blaise I would have him show a bit more emotion towards his family. I can see where the stoic personality is trying to go but without a softer side to balance it his personality falls flat and seems almost robotic. Also, I also loved your story! It was amazing and I enjoyed reading it. All my love, Jazzi |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2018 I love this story and am happy to re-read it. But I just realized... What happened to Leah's brother, Seth? |
noxenrom chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 Cheesy shit. Especially since you couldn't decide if Harry was a vampire or a true immortal. |
nanakim2118 chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 Never bored to read this story again and again |
wolfydies chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 you could have used the book for reference... or googled whatever you were trying to quote |
Bloly chapter 1 . 10/20/2017 Aw, I like this one! |
MoonLitReader chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 My friend just set me this and it was amazing |
domsijohn chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 Just brilliant i also wish Seth still changes |
knuckles 8 chapter 1 . 5/25/2017 cute story |
Venus914 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 That confrontation Hermione instigated with Aro...Hermione and Ron was unnecessary. Damn this muggleborn beaver. Ive always hated her. Im not convinced that her wanting immortality is due to them wantingbto be with Harry. Harry is immortal and he is already with an immortal Blaise. She just doesnt want to die and Ron too. Now knowing Harry's power and loyalty, they know they are virtually untouchable. So they are powertripping the Voturi |
Venus914 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 Leah is just disgusting for Teddy. I will not go over Jacob's imprinting on Renesmee. Its disgusting too. Why? Because Jacob has probably thought of having sex with Bella. And Leah is just not right for Teddy. She's abrasive. I prefer Teddy with Seth. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2017 So I never normally review stories but this story is so cute and so wonderfully written. It may not be chapters and chapters long, but you've conveyed perfectly the story, I loved it and I hope you keep writing. |