The logical leap to go from 'they were circling their prey' straight to 'I bet my life they've tasted human flesh' is absolutely bizzare. Can we expect our MC to start judging people's life story by what they order at lunch now? Or maybe he can tell how trustworthy someone is by how tightly they tie their shoes.
What a farcical passage.

It seems like so called trainers don't actually train pokemon in this fic? It's like the video games where the MC just sends them into battle and that's it. So why do trained pokemon supposedly get stronger than in the wild?

I hope there are some actual training scenes with pokemon practicing advanced techniques, it would be pretty pitiful to see the Elite 4 just shouting move names like a newbie.

I was going to bitch about Amy being an ass but she did kind of redeem herself. I'm hoping that in the future we could see Riven get into situations where he subdues people instead of killing them. Also does Giratina have anything to do with the figure he met? It is described just how Giratina is seen in the games.

I feel like this fanfic deserves more attention.

This story speaks of hardwork and effort that went into it. But it reads like an untuned guiter. Everything is there but arranged haphazardly. It doesn't have the free flow of the more successful SIs like "Y'know nothing Jon Snow" and " Sun of Sunnyshore". This a extremely descriptive at times, boring in general and the MC gets too much attention for all the more bizzare reasons like carrying blades and his hair coloring. Not to mention the fact that its extremely slow, convoluted and for the most part uninteresting untill some major plot points come up

I am not criticizing to be mean. Just keep this in mind when writing in the future. Taking tips from successful stories will improve your style.

My god...I binge read this entire thing over the course of several days and I absolutely loved it, hope you'll back to this sooner than later.

Love the story so far! I found your work only 5 days ago and i just cant stop reading it! Hope to see more in the future!

Why do the gods hate me? Why am I always recommended the shit that's good, but that doesn't have an ending?! Why do I listen to Reddit?!

Just found this after browsing reddit. I binged the whole thing. I hope you’re still working on it cuz people are still reading!

i will take a shot on whats going on with riven before reading the chapter. if clans specialized on their own "type" sort of thing, like roses being fire and curians being psychic, ceruls must be dark

fuck, im going to lose my mind

Hope you come back to it man. Fun stuff even if I am confused as to how Riven split from Hasei

I'm eager to read the next chapter... Whenever it comes out, that is. This is one of the best fanfiction stories on the site, I think. And trust me, I have very high standards when it comes to this sort of thing. I hope you're doing ok and staying safe during this virus outbreak!

WTF!? WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT!? WHY WOULD YOU MAKE RIVEN LOSE HIS WEAPONS!? IT'S DANGEROUS FOR HIM ESPECIALLY NOW THAT SOME MAFIA BOSS IS AFTER HIM!? ALSO THE FACT THAT THOSE SWORDS ARE SOME TYPE OF HEIRLOOM AND SAM'S OLD FISHING ROD!? WHY!? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE IT LIKE HE WOULD BE ABLE TO GET IT BACK PLEASE!

If this is gonna be some faggy shit lmk so i can stop reading now thanks