Love it please write more

love it please write more

Slight critical: Some of these past chapters have sounded like a broken record of someone saying something along the lines of "Oliver will be fine" and Oliver absolving someone of their guilt.

Since you always call Felicity the "secret weapon" you totally need to write a fic titled "Secret Wepon" where Felicity is totally badass and saves everyone! Not much of a prompt but maybe it'll get your muses going :)

Ah the end of chapter 16 is heart breaking!

Wtf Thea you just left! Like didn't even call Oliver to say "nvm misunderstanding" gosh idk how Oliver can blame himself when people make the dumbest decisions!

Christ, Laurel is awful! I won't be surprised if she joins Slade in his crusade and I'm surprised she didn't do something against Oliver ever in the show. Ending of ch 11 (I think) is so cute! I love it when Felicity calls Oliver her hero.

So since all this militarty stuff is from Australia I'm gonna guess it's Slade this season!? 10/10 would not be sad if Laurel died because she's being so mean to Felicity!

I was wondering when Roy was going to be brought up. It seemed really odd that out of everyone Roy was the only they didn't seem concerned about/hadn't mentioned.

All in all, I think this is a good story, although I think Felicity is a bit OOC at certain parts. Is Roy going to show up? He's my favorite character.

I'm going to do my best to keep this spoiler free but still get my point across. Mostly this is due to your opening author's note. I'm kind of convinced that if you and Mic RiddyBanon either wrote this cliffhanger from Hell or someone on the writing staff reads fanfiction and was inspired. Hey aren't we impressed, wrote all that and didn't give anything known away. (We've known the finale was going to be called and on Lian Yu for a while.) After watching the finale I was in need of some serious Olicity and ended up here again. LOL After I update my fix then I'll go back and make my comments on your "Flashpoint" updates.

Grounds him in actually threatening him.

I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing!

And that is why I miss Sara! Though I have to say my newest ship aside from Jam LOL is Cptn Cold/White Canary. It is a beautiful thing, what can I say I love the snark. LOL

Well we both know I've never been Laurel's biggest fan but I think Oliver telling her off is a thing of beauty to be treasured! (at least as much as Sam's MP3I have another discussion we need to have about that) but telling Laurel where she stands in relation to Felicity...just makes me giggle and chuckle and laugh and finally ROTFLMAO! Just a beautiful thing my friend!