This is such a cute chapter! Love how you write these characters here too.

Sad ending, as of course was the reality of what happened pre-series.

This is such a cleverly written, poignant chapter.

Sweet, sad chapter.

Seeing a different side of Veronica than is typically seen in the flashbacks of pre-season events. I like it! Makes sense that this side of her character already had to be there in some form.

This is great! They are so cute here.

i loved your little window into the past

its very good. I'm hoping u are going to continue with the story. I'm excited to see if Logan and veronicas new relationship leads to them getting together

Ouch.

For being everyone's favourite season, it's incredibly hard to come by season 1 and pre-series fanfiction. I loved this, all of it. Every indescribably perfect detail. It was so amazingly in character, so them, not just in comparison to flashbacks we saw in the show but the people they became. You laid out such a beautiful, obvious path for their natural progression. Something that could be fully taken as canon with exceptions only of mere minor details. I love their closeness, they're friends, the best of but something about them even back then just didn't quite fit black and white into that category. They've always been shades of grey. I adore your Lilly, so many people paint her in a negative light. It's nice to see her showcased in a wild, free, happy, loving teenage light. She was manipulative, yes and boy did she make a lot of mistakes. Disgusting, mistakes but she wasn't a monster and she didn't deserve the fate bestowed upon her. Lilly loved her friends and family, despite the words and actions that seemingly proved otherwise.

The part in which Veronica laid out her well thought out plan to kill his father was heart clenching and the reference to it in her incoherent post-death babbling was heart shattering. All in all I just, love.

WOW!

I LOVE this. It is so adorable! Logan should totally get veronica in the breakup, it's only fair. Your dialogue is fantastic, btw.

Are you planning on continuing this storyline? Interested in seeing if you follow the storyline they took with the show where Veronica was outcast or going a different direction.

This is extraordinarily good.
You have successfully managed to take the events we all know from the TV series, and weave a very interesting and new "take" that stands on its own legs.
Have you thought of taking the same approach to some of the other parts of the VM series?

Wow Logan's hate filled words at the end brought tears streaming down my face!