this was a good story. Wished it got more attention. The other one was good to

Eeeeee! I can't wait for the sequel!

Yay thinks starting to look better.

Now just confine Anakin and Tahiri to one room for a couple of days, so both can talk/beat some sense into the other and make up after that.
Hopefully the 'teenage rebel i know better, because you don't understand me'-phase is now over.

Hopefully the confinement-theory isn't far of D

Caly

It was always going to come down to a tap on the head, I suspect. At times, it could have been any of the main cast who actually delivered it.

I've very much enjoyed reading the story, and I apologise for not finding it sooner. I just hope things will turn out for the best between Anakin and Tahiri.

Firecadet

Hmmm...I can't blame Danni for being a bit nervous. The last time I read about Kyp messing with someone's mind, Qui Xux lost most of her memories.

Crap. I'm hoping that something has happened to Jace when he was frozen, and that this isn't 'him'. As an aside: why does it always seem to be Jacen? Why doesn't anyone write about Jaina doing something stupid? Or Zekk? Heck, even a dark TK would be welcome.

Good stuff...in a 'I hope Jacen isn't turning into Caedus' sort of way.

Hey, sorry for long time no reviews.
Life kinda got me the last month.
Anyway a couple of most interessting things happened, huh?
Tahiri getting away from Anakin was kinda dumb - maybe here him out, if he's okay with her plus nightmares or rather alone and with nightmares.. especially when they still lived quite next door.
It really looked like 'you beeing hurt is bad... let's both be hurt instead'.
I'm glad you didn't make some freakish Jacen getting romantically closer to Tahiri thing out of that teaching her! *shudder*
Anakin and that serum sounds promising as far as story potential goes, at least if I'm right in assuming he will not just stop taking it.
That Riina breakout would have been a nice reason for some direct A/T interaction.
Jacen is in a wierd state story wise right now. We don't know if he's fighting what happens with him or if he even knows. Due to lack of evidence for the first point, I would assume the second point, which relates to how can anyone, especially Anakin considering what he might have done/is doing to Tahiri, would be able to trust him again. I know I wouldn't let him watch of my kids alone.

Nonetheless I'm still enjoying this a lot, so until next chapter

Caly

Hmmm...I still think Corran is being unrealistic with this...'I know better than you...' The only way to understand what she can do is to DO it.

Ah, yes, the Zekk-Jag rivalry thing...I forgot about it, truth be told. Zekk was always too broody for my taste; Jag was a better fit for her.

Okay, you've creeped me out with the slave seed...and why do I get the feeling my favorite astrophysicist is the 'spy'?

'You are imagining things.' I LOVED this line...you make TK totally likable.

Well, crap...a rogue Jedi wandering about messing with people's memories...this can't be good. Someone wants Anakin out of the picture, apparently.

Yay to the J/TK scene!

So I finally got a few hours to catch up.

Quite a ride our favorite couple had there and I liked it very much.
One thing about Meina Anbra that a probably would have liked more, if she was a bit more insane, like someone who gecame addicted to those force visions and was hermiting because else she try to see everything about the people around her through visions. Like what she did, when she knew A/T where approching.
Another thing regarding Anakins visions: what if actually seeing them is needed to keep his death from repeating and avoiding them, would mean fate trys to right what when wrong when he didn't die.
Would create quite a nice dilemma for them.

Anyway, still reading and still enjoying!
Til next Update

Caly

Wow, my glasses are still fogged from that shower, but I'm pretty sure this has to be M Rating.
I don't know if it could mean trouble if you leave it like that, but it honestly should be M.
Great scene anyway!

Caly

Nice to read of you again!
I was kinda worried already, since you overshot your announced date quite a bit )
I'm still worried, but only about what your story title might imply.

Very good reentry. Both our heros seem like they lack a big chunk of confidence after Bonds, especially Anakin. I think it will be interesting, how you plan to refuel them with some confidence and how their relationship might play into it or is affected by it.

Looking forward to reading more, especially because Fish is pausing 'A Fate Unseen' for a little bit )

Caly