| Reviews for Too Little, Too Late: A Two-Shot Story |
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Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2019 so he was abusive because he was abused? OOOOK. And he repeatedly cheated on Bella? Nice. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2019 The excuses you seem to find for Edward acting in such a way...don't hold up. And again, your grammar is horrific. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2019 Some of the grammar was horrific. EDIT~~ |
sue1zide chapter 2 . 12/24/2017 I thought committing suicide banned one from Heaven. |
sue1zide chapter 1 . 12/24/2017 I wonder if that really happens when you die? |
Jennifer chapter 2 . 2/22/2015 Wow! Are you planning to continue this? |
CoppertopJ chapter 2 . 2/21/2015 I'm not a theologist, a christian, or even religious in any manner, but one would think that being released from the shackles of this earthly domain, that forgiveness would be a given. Surprised she did not forgive him. Not happy she didn't, seems she is just as cruel as him. |
midnitereader chapter 2 . 2/21/2015 Wow, I say again. I'm glad he showed remorse for what he'd done. What a horrible monster Marcus was threatening a young, naive boy like that. Intimidation is a powerful tool. But Marcus got destroyed. I really wonder if it was random burglars that broke into his house. And now Edward grieves for what could have been. I totally thought it was HEA her coming back to comfort him, until she said she didn't know if she would forgive him. And that is something he will have to live with for the rest of his life. How sad. |
midnitereader chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 Wow, I've never read something so powerful. Edward treating her so badly. No one coming to her rescue. Bella feeling like she had no choice. Going from one abuser to another. In the end, Edward was so remorseful. But like the title said, "Too little, too late." |
scrosby66 chapter 2 . 2/20/2015 Loved it...good angst! Thanks for writing |
Sarah Amin chapter 2 . 2/20/2015 I love a HEA but no just no .. That's his excuse , his grandfather .. He could have reported his ass and his parents would have protected him .. He's a monster .. |
debslmac chapter 2 . 2/15/2015 So sad ... |
CSG chapter 2 . 9/29/2014 So sad. Thanks for sharing it! :) |
CSG chapter 1 . 9/29/2014 Wow! |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2014 Sorry, but that has got to be the most ridiculous shit i've ever read. So bad! |