You write a great story! Thank you for sharing!

I have so much love for this story, I could actually see it. You wrote them so well!

This is one of your best. H/C from both sides and lots of brotherly snark/love. Perfect. I like Dan too.

Good story!

Sort of a sideways question for you about your fic art. You have so many fantastic covers for your fics, is there anywhere that larger versions are posted to put on ePubs of your work?
The ones on Fanfiction are a bit on the small size resolution wise.
I'm at meusvenator at gmail dot com if there is somewhere I should look : )))

I can't express how much I love this fic! I usually don't warm to outsiders, but I sincerely hope to see Dan again, preferably in the same capacity. Brava!

Hahaha!

This was great. And Dean's reaction to cherpumple is everyone's reaction to cherpumple.

I absolutely loved this story. The outside POV is something I always enjoy. thanks for writing!

Great story

Thank you for a terrific read. The story had me sympathy shivering in Texas in May. I liked your OCs, even Harry, the concerned bus driver. I'm very fond of your first person outsider POV character, Dan. His background and characteristics are well-thought out and make this intersection of RL and Winchesters a fantastic, fun read.
I'm a bit surprised that they ended up in the hospital under their real names, since Sam told Dan his real name in the concussion drill. So personal head-canon to get around this: I since it's sixth season and they've been officially 'dead' since JIB, Bobby gave them fake insurance cards under their own names as a welcome home gift for souled Sam.

I started reading this at the tail end of a 24 hour bout of insomnia. The words began to jumble and I had to stop halfway through. When I woke up I was terrified because I couldn't remember the name of the story, the author, nothing, and thought I'd spend the next week trying to find it. Thank Chuck I left the browser open and was able to finish this enthralling, insanely well written story. I normally shy away from OC stories, but after reading this, I may have to change a few of my habits. It was amazing.

You must have medical experience. Bed at a 45 degree angle? That's insider talk my friend.

Thank you and I look forward to reading everything you've ever written.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards: April 2016

This was an incredibly exciting story, which kept the tension up successfully all the way through. I loved the original character, who was believable and capable. Sam & Dean were extremely recognisable and all of their behaviours felt consistent with their characters. I loved your narrative style which flowed throughout beautifully. Thanks so much for writing.

Thanks so much, really enjoyed this, seemed to whip by in a matter of minutes!

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review : April 2016

Very well-written, the plot simple but thoroughly explained and the characterisation of the brothers was beautifully drawn, accurate for the situation, both Dean and Sam's reactions showing the tension even through the limited graveyard humour quips. I can't tell you how nice it is to read a realistic depiction like that instead of having to wade through hundreds of tension-sapping, inappropriate attempts at one-liners that neither brother would use in such dire circumstances! The dialogue is exceptionally good, naturalistic and clear, giving information in passing, and the lore used was refreshingly accurate from the canon. The only thing that could have enhanced this story would have been clear scene dividers, at those points where the action moved from one location to another. It wasn't, however, difficult to follow.

Overall, this was an exciting tail end of a hunt gone wrong, clearly shown through a well-developed OC and I will be looking for more of your work. Thank you for writing!

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review - April 2016

This story was just as fun to read the second time as it was the first! You captured the Winchester brothers perfectly. I haven't read many stories that use the outsider POV, but this one worked for me. I really liked Dan, and the way you had him adapt to Sam's situation so quickly. His willingness to help Sam, even when it was obvious that Sam wasn't a 'normal' guy, was very well portrayed. I totally believed the way he adapted to the knowledge that ghosts were real, because you had already showed that Dan had a pragmatist outlook. I would love to see a sequel, or follow-up, to this story.