Loving it

hmmm... the story has potential. but it's writing is a bit chaotic. for instance near the end, Lantern was asked to escort Mina to the infirmary. but suddenly there were 3 ppl, Lantern, Mina and someone else. who? don't know, you never mentioned. was it Wonder Woman? she asked Lantern to escort, why would she go as well? then...situation logic: why would Mina transform? i don't see the need for it. Serena was not under attack. and they were among possible enemies. a transformation would really be a last resort. as i said, Serena was not attacked, just emotionally unstable. did not warrant a transformation, according to my logic. third, why was Saturn coming to Venus, how did she know where to find her? i mean... she would have stayed with Serena to comfort her, or try. not leave her alone to call for back-up. Mina was bound to arrive anyway, with all the explosion. and DUE to the damage, Serena was probably in danger of getting hurt, with her state of mind. a guard was supposed to be by her side at all times. so these are only a few things that you might wanna check. as i stated before, the story has potential. pls don't stop :)

This is awesome! But you adding in too many characters from too many anime's. _

The mix at the end was awesome! _

I love fan-fiction, but it urks me when people don't get the timeline of things. Usagi was able to gain the power of Cosmos for a short time with the battle of Galaxia. After that, her powers were still growing, meaning that she became Cosmos decades after Crystal Tokyo had worn down. Just some fun facts for ya, hope it helps. _

It's hard choosing who Sere would be good with since SuperBoy was dating M'gann in young justice. _

Might want to re-read your story for, you know grammar. But this is cool! _

cool story pls update it soon

this seems good so far but there are a few grammar mistakes you might want to look at.

F-ing no! I hate those shiting bastard. gaaaahh

no no no no no serna and dick i forbid it.

Let me guess serena gets conner
Hotaru gets Dick (my dream has come true)
and mina gets wally.

please please please update soon I am loving this story.

I cant wait for the next chapter. _

lol poor oliver. having to deal with a whole bunch of super powered girls at a sleep over. this aught to be interesting. can't wait for the next update.