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Marvel's disneydream universe chapter 70 . 8/9 The world that the Pokèmon/Avatar/Jurassic world takes place in this world but than with replacements. For examble since Kalos is inspired by France France will be replaced by Kalos or China replaced by Ba sing se. I am not shure about the kidnapping backstory for my Lightfury character yet but i really want something with the villain/CEO that raises a depressed dragon. There will also be some characters in my story that will have Sighter like abilities but indeed of showing the event directly the event will be told trough riddles. |
Marvel's disneydream universe chapter 11 . 8/8 One thing forgot to say there will be Bionicle characters that are greenor other colour of Lantern. One examble is that Tahu will be a Red Lantern. Mainly because Hal was cheeting on Gali. Man are problems always looking for Hal? Gali will be a Blue Lantern and Takua/Takanuva will be a Green Lantern as succesor for Lhikan. There will be crossover episodes for my series. I am also asking help for some plot ideas for the Toa Terra saga from the storyline. Oh and if you are wondering what are the Toa Terra are. They are some teenagers that can transform into Toa and fightvagainst Makuta on Earth. The idea is orinally not mine it is inspired from TFAN Override-Dragon Light. You should really check out the stories of this writer. The Bionicle stories the writer makes are really good. The main plot of the Toa Terra i have alrwady in mind but still not have inspiration for every epiode. Man why is the pilot and the ending always the easiest and the middle always hard to write? |
Marvel's disneydream universe chapter 3 . 8/8 Hey KikaKatTIOI can you help me with episode ideas for a ALTA/LOK/Jurassic World/Pokémon/DC/HTTYD and Bionicle crossover fanfic? The fanfic is about the Avatar that is after Korra so thaat means it takes place alround 2015/2016. The first two episodes will be mainly about the 2015 Jurassic World movie but than with OC's and a ending that the I-Rex will be tamed indeed of getting killed by the queen of Nublar. However Hoskins will still die what will become the main reason for his daughter to take revenge on both the Avatar and the Indy. I also have already some episodes in mind for the story two are about a earthquake created by earthbending that one of the villain OC 's will use as a escape methode after getting arested. Here is a little bit of Background info for making the episodes easier: Violet: Status: Earth bender/Avatar/Metahuman/ Star saphire. Jop: Works for Indominus Acctraction. Animal quide: Leafeon. Inportent event: When she was a kid she went eith her older brother and parents to the cinema but a fire breaks out that the parents did not survive. Her brother was seperated from her ever since. Till the day of today Violet still thinks it is her fould that her parents died cause she wanted to that movie. During the movie events of the story she gets accidently injected with a serum that give her I-Rex powers suvmck as Heat vision and invisibility and Pokémon powers because our untamble Indy does have the DNA of Mew. Why? One of her creators worked gor Team Rocket. The organisation that created Mewtwo. Main villain (Not Violets father): Status: Earth bender/Metahuman. Jop: Jurassic world CEO/Former nember of Team Rocket. Inortent event: During the bird shene of Indy's escape his wife died. This is one of the main reasons why he takes revenge on Indy. He also became the new CEO of INGEN that owns Jurassic World to get closer to his enemies. Later he injects himself with the serum to get stronger. He also kidnapped a Lightfury that Indy sees as her sister because they where in the same cage till the Lightfury gets sick. Claire takes the Lightfury to the local nurse to heal her what ends up by the kidnapping. Even he treats the Lightfury like she is his own daughter the Lightfury got depressed. I am asking you for help because you make episodes like it's nothing while i am stuck with writers block for my own episode ideas. The same thing i am asking you for the Sinestro corp saga. Don't worry i have already a view episodes in mind. Some of then will be based on the last episode of ALTA book 2 and book 1. What means that one of the origenal GLTAS characters will sacrifice himself for saving the Hope Entity after Sinestro killed it. For the Blackest night saga i have already all the episodes but i am still struggeking with the number of Enteties and Show Yourself. And yes Athohallon does exist in the universe i sm creating but indeed of a river that shows the past it is a spirit world prtal that leads directly to the Tree of Time. Later my characters and characters that already exist will appear during a Avengers Endgame event of the last two episodes of Blackest night. Not that i am lazy for creating my own episodes based on comics i just don't have inspiration for episodes. And again you make episodes like you are doing it your whole life so i could really use your help for inspiration. |
Marvel's disneydream universe chapter 2 . 8/2 My OC is someone who was brought to Earth for safety because she carries great power in her. During GLTAS Episosede 7 Recoming she finds out where she comes from but the things are starting to become really clear during the Blackest Night saga. Can't say too mutch because of cause of spoilers but i can at least confirm it has somthing to do with Razer. |
Marvel's disneydream universe chapter 1 . 8/2 Can you please help me with a Blackest Night fanfic i am writing? I've found out already how to deal with the whole Ahtohallen thing (i think) for my Green Lanthern OC quz i really wanted to do somthing with Frozen 2 but i am still a bit struggeling about the Show yourself part. The problem is that there are seven Enteties but during the "come to me now" part of the song there is only room for four spirits/entities for my OC to transform and because you are a great GL fanfic writer i realky can use your help about it. Oh and the Ahtohallen thing is not somthong to resolve the past it is the location where the Life Entity could be found. |
Imaginestarsines chapter 144 . 7/21 And pretty please can you stop using curse words they always make me feel disgusted and uneasy,so please I beg you to NEVER USE THEM |
Imaginestarsines chapter 144 . 7/21 More please |
Blue Tagg chapter 143 . 6/16 I'm looking forward to the finally. Been on this story since the Fields we know. Also, know we know who Blackhand was, but how did his body get to outer space? |
Marvel's disneydream universe chapter 62 . 6/14 When the white lantern stuff appears than you really need to add the Justice Leaque in the story. It was in the comics so it would be cool if it happens. Cool story by the way. I saw some reverences and hilarious moments that rally made my day while reading. The return of LANOS and Sinestro working together with Larveleese genius. That part of Appa and Ganthet with the do you trust me reminded me of Endgame with Iron Man and Captain amarica. The race between Hal and B-0 also reminded me of Star Wars. Just genius. |
Guest chapter 142 . 6/7 AFTER 12 YEARS IN AZKABAAAN WE FINALLY GET A RAZAYA KISS Mary's reaction represents the fandom. Plz let us read one final kiss before the end, like a "we survive another war and we're finally together" kind of kiss. Also, Aya being sassy and smirking? Love it, totally approve it, Razer better not screw things up again |
Grim T Reaper chapter 142 . 6/9 At least those two finally got their kiss :P |
Grim T Reaper chapter 141 . 5/18 Hm, so that's actually Black Hand controlling the dead then. |
Guest chapter 140 . 5/14 ok its happening ITS FINALLY HAPPENING we got our girl back! Although I'm concerned about how Mary might take it, she just watched Hal "die" and two minutes later her friend decides to make a dramatic entrance and save the day. And then there are the Guardians and Red Lanterns who, if I remember correctly, do not have a good opinion about Aya since what happened with the Anti-Monitor |
Grim T Reaper chapter 140 . 5/4 Hm, not quite how i envisioned Aya making her 'active' return all those chapters ago (I honestly can't remember when, it was back when i was still using my old username, couple of years ago i think) I'm guessing you liked the last four episodes of TCW as much as i did :) i still need to listen to the Ashoka audio book on audible. Next chapter should be interesting. |
MMELG chapter 139 . 4/30 Hi KikaKaTIOI, hopefully they meet aya soon, it almost looks like shes close to them. Hopefully Mary and Razer been doing well throughout the entire adventure. How you been doing well since the COVID 19 hit California? |