| Reviews for Not-quite-successful pick up lines |
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   Sophisticated Sage chapter 1 . 12/29/2019 So romantic :D |
| ynyn chapter 1 . 2/16/2019 Okay, this was absolutely hilarious. Thank you for writing this. |
| CuteWhiteBunny chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 Completely unfamiliar with the fandom, but I do love a good crackfic. And this fits the bill nicely :D "recognizing the tone and not liking where this was going" Yeah, can't say I blame her :P So many terrible, terrible pick up lines. Well done. |
| TheLaw146 chapter 1 . 10/18/2016 Extremely funny! I thought that this was a very well written and thought about story. Good job. I laughed way too loud at the terrorist one though. |
| Blahyada122264 chapter 1 . 7/31/2016 OMG THE LAST ONE THOUGH XD I WILL NEVER FORGET THESE LINES (so gonna use them soon) |
| Gojirahkiin chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 I asked myself why I hadn't reviewed this yet, even though it's in my favorites. Then I got to the last pick-up line and remembered that I was laughing too hard the first time around. This was utterly hysterical and gave me a good laugh when I needed it. Thank you. |
| Ravena Wolfborn chapter 1 . 3/27/2016 still hilarious |
| EmD23 chapter 1 . 3/30/2015 Hahaha that last pick-up line. I have to wonder if she's that bad, or if Yang is purposely feeding her awful lines to drive Weiss up the wall. |
| Jonathan314 chapter 1 . 1/6/2015 I had a hard time trying not to laugh out loud in public while reading this. |
| JuiceCarver chapter 1 . 11/24/2014 These are the fanfictions that pull out my heart and mind, stomp over them and return them to me. This is what I live for. |
| Commander Sparkles chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 DO YOU SERVE THIS STORY AT MCDONALD'S, BECAUSE I'M LOVIN' IT. THIS IS PERFECT. YOU COMBINED CHEESY PICK UP LINES AND RWBY (TWO OF MY FAVORITE THINGS) INTO ONE AMAZINGLY AWESOME AND HILARIOUS STORY. I FELL OUT OF MY CHAIR A FEW TIMES BECAUSE I WAS LAUGHING SO MUCH. YOU SERIOUSLY DESERVE AN AWARD FOR THIS. |
| Anonymuse chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 I kind of want to see a part two where Blake and Weiss get together to commiserate about all the horrible pick up lines they've been subjected to, and maybe discuss how they've tried to counter it. |
| fel95 chapter 1 . 8/9/2014 "My love for you is like diarrhea. I just can't hold it in." Best pickup line ever. Of all time. |
| Villain84 chapter 1 . 7/19/2014 Hahahahaha that was hilarious! A lot of these pick-up lines are really creative and really funny! And it's even funnier how Ruby pulls them off! And also the one Weiss uses at the end here! And apparently Blake's gotta put up with the same stuff from Yang! Just awesome! Love this ship, love this story. Cute and hilarious! |
| Army of Grimm chapter 1 . 6/28/2014 ohmYGOD THE ONE WEISS PULLED OFF WAS GOLD EVERYTHING WAS GOLD LOVED THEM ALL THANK |
