| Reviews for Unexpected Ally |
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   Apples04 chapter 3 . 7/21 OMFG 'Onion Land' killed me inside |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/10 Really good ,please continue. |
| Larryry chapter 8 . 6/8 OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THIS STORY Hope to see you update soon |
| anvilsanchez chapter 8 . 4/17 This is so good! |
| Ryka Janine P Cajes chapter 8 . 4/28/2019 Please update! Your story is very good. I'm looking forward for the next many chapter! |
| TsukuyoGintoki chapter 8 . 3/28/2019 I wish this was finished. I was truly enjoying this story. |
| BulanFebruari chapter 8 . 2/28/2019 This is so cool! And I can't stop laughing to Levis remark about too many orange in Naruto's clothes |
| YukiChoi chapter 8 . 1/1/2019 Oh no. This story was made around 2014 and last updated around 2017. And it is already 2019. Sigh. I really really really love this. It's such a fresh idea. I hope you'll update soon. |
| PrimitiveManSyndrome chapter 8 . 10/31/2018 yo. I love what you've done so far. I think you're the only author pursuing this concept. I hope you can get back to this fic soon. |
| Voadoro The Sky chapter 5 . 6/10/2018 Oh I laughed so much! |
| Emocean chapter 6 . 4/20/2018 You clearly put a lot of thought into it, and I can really respect that, but all this world-building that's bunched up into just a few chapters is honestly a bit confusing. I like how this is going, though! Nice! |
| ManawaSasa chapter 8 . 3/23/2018 Please, more update! |
| MattKennedy chapter 8 . 3/2/2018 Cool story so far! :D |
| Pineapple Child chapter 8 . 2/11/2018 Love it. |
| ashuri-chan24 chapter 8 . 1/18/2018 I hope you'll be able to finish this story. this is the first time I've read something like this |
