i have to say..this one is my favourite chap!

Evil,evil,evil... absolutely fabulastitaculously horrible... NO Aoshi-sama is misao's... anyway, lots-of-luv, I'm gonna read on now... :K

So close to a kissie-wishie... so cutsie-wutsie... must love this chapter... "What was she doing to me?" thinks aoshi- well, my beloved aoshi-sama, ur in love... anyway, loved the whole thing- creative way for misao to get out of a fix... by the way, when you say hear, like hear as in ears, and hearing, it's spelled H-E-A-R not H-E-R-E ( i just made that correction because i feel like i should be giving more constructive criticism as a revier- don't take it personally...) :D

SKETCH! OH my god- i can't read on... PLEZE this is horrid- uh-oh spaghettio. Jazzy is worried... HELP! this is BAD... :( Let me guess- there's gonna be jealousy between soujiro and Aoshi- It wuz kinda unclear how Misao hid in the pool or whatever for a while, but good chappie...

Love is in the air- pretty funny- aoshi said "you're a fighter" dream on, aoshi- she's more than just a fighter- u luv her! a-duh! anyway, great fic-ie wickie... :)

Hello- u've been lucksie- usually i review after EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER- luv the chappie- very nice... i knew they were going to the same function/family thing- intreaguing plot- like the whole thing where theres still martial arts and stuff- some modern versions cut that out... keep up the ABSOLUTELYFABULATASTICAGREAT WORK :D

Is this "shoujo sports manga" Hana Kimi by any chance? Sounds very much like it...haha. Good start!

I love this story! Particularly Misao's strong, funny voice. She's such an awesome character! Good work!

Aoshi-sama fanclub. oh, the lovely Fruits Baskety goodness ;) well this section is all very wonderful _

well, yay! for Furuba... I'll just add comments as I go through, then. (ch2) as per that Tamora Pierce comment: TP rocks!, and not only does the Misao pretending to BE a guy compare to Alanna, but Kenshin actually resembles her (short, red hair, purple eyes, excellent swordsman) something I always find amusing...

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Darn I just read this and am not going to have a whole bunch of sleep for work haven't for the last fe days. It's a really awesome story...sad that it may never be finished I loved it. I kinda wish you could have gotten one more chapter put..yeah i' m mean sorry abbout that. I didn't finish this author note, in case you ever finish. It's an awesome story and I hope you will finish it someday. Love it lots.

aw, too bad you won't be finishing it, but so far it has been a GREAT FANFIC! hehe, not too much action and not too much waffiness

Well, all in all I think that would have been a great ending for a shoujo manga... And upon reflection, I also think you were probably very inspired by Hanakimi, weren't you? Well, I understand the need to for space to develop original works, and since you've given us, your readers an ending/closure-which so few writers do these days, you have my blessings!

good story! anyway- hope you update soon!

A very suitable ending! Don't worry, I know what you mean about all the reviews and stuff. Great job on the story, and well, if you couldn't make it, then you couldn't make it. No worries. I was looking for this on , but I think that site may've shut down...? Anyway, Cheers!