Great story but make more chapters please !

yes mamiii

If someone is continuing this tell me please and if not I'll try to do it

This was an awesome chapter

Ahahahahaha! Omg wait till they explain that one!

lol! nice! cant wait for the next chapter!

You f****** a****** why would you leave on such a cliffhanger

This story is great! It’s pretty hard to find Male Oc stories in general, never mind from Magi.

I love this! It's great so far! Not gonna lie, I'm really missing Magus's bond with Aladdin, Morgiana, and the twins. I thought it was very sweet. If you're still taking votes to break the tie between the three, I vote Judal. There's just something about Asura seducing Judal over to his side that makes the pairing very enticing. Plus, now that Asura has all that experience, I'm always imagining him on top or at the very least, switching every now and then. Although, if you really wanted to, you could pair him with all three: have a brief fling with Masrur (with the heat, you've got the set up for it) and Koen can have something similar, like a benefit of the situation kind of thing, and then have him finally end up with Judal, who he's been flirting with all the while. Plus, he finds comfort in the Black Rukh surrounding Judal, whereas Masrur and (probably) Koen have mainly white.

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us! Good luck in your writing!

Idk when you’ll update, but is going to wait

I love your story, I hope you update soon! Keep up the amazing work

THAT'S RIGHT, MASRUR! FIGHT FO' YO' MANNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

-snerk-

That last part of the chapter had me smirking. I get the feeling Masrur is going to get major blue balls as he tries getting Asura to consider him mate material. xD

Whelp. It's official, I ship MasrurxMagus. I can't wait till they meet again.(He's the fanalis that works for Sinbad, right? It's been a while since I've read/watched any Magi stuff.) I bet Masrur will be even more determined to have Magus as his other half by then! :P

More plz

*hiss* I want all of them! I want Magus/Asura to be loved so completely, that he won't be able to walk. Don't do it~, don't choose~. Just give us all of them, or at least introduce Kouen before deciding.