Reviews for Lost in Translation
Guest chapter 7 . 2/2/2016
I'm so sorry to hear that.. I don't know if that can help you but we will wait here until you feel like coming back. Never give up! 3
ElvhenRogue chapter 7 . 2/2/2016
I wish you the best of luck
Rayze0792 chapter 7 . 2/2/2016
Stay strong and find your happiness. Don't force yourself to continue until you feel you are ready. I'll be waiting for a future update on your endeavors.
BekkahBear chapter 7 . 12/10/2015
Hey I really like this story and your writing style, it was a really good read! I hope you finish it because wow I really enjoyed this!
NA1234455 chapter 6 . 8/9/2015
Uh, also, I'm wondering if for this line Blake might have stopped talking to Yang as if she was a stranger and start using "tu" instead of "vous"? Because using "vous" is usually to address people you don't really know and to be polite about it. "Tu" is more familiar. Anyway, you do as you'd like with that information -

"Vous êtes vraiment une imbécile pervertie..."
NA1234455 chapter 5 . 8/9/2015
Blake's questions are fine. To Jaune's line:

"Si elle le fait, j'espère que ça sera loin de mon restaurant."
NA1234455 chapter 3 . 8/9/2015
"Je veut avoir du sexe sauvage avec vous."
NA1234455 chapter 2 . 8/9/2015
"Vous avez causée assez de mal aujourd'hui! Je ne vous laisserai pas blesser ses sentiments plus que ça, espèce de salaud inconsidérée!" (Other options here instead of "espèce de salaud" are "sale salaud" or "espèce d'imbécile").
"Les gens comme vous ne méritez pas d'affections et cette femme ne devrait jamais vous pardonner!"
NA1234455 chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
Hey. I really enjoy this story. It's very entertaining and interesting. However, I speak French fluently and I thought you wouldn't mind if I suggested some proper translations? It's intriguing that you decided to go through with this idea that required the usage of a language you aren't familiar with on a regular basis, and definite points for effort. I mean, this fanfic really is quite good.

I'll go in order, if that's alright with you?

"Mes amies ont quelques questions à vous poser."
"À moins que ce soit important, je n'ai pas le temps de répondre à plus de vos questions."
"Jaune, votre amie pique-assiette est une idiote."

I'll comment the other chapters with better translations in the same manner. -
gx257 chapter 7 . 2/19/2015
I really enjoy this story Can't wait for the next update
Tear of Light chapter 6 . 2/10/2015
Poor Yang. I couldn't but laugh at her reactions to the movie. They were utterly hilarious. XD Me thinks a certain cat Faunas may be warming up to a certain blonde. :)
Prinplup64 chapter 7 . 2/2/2015
I can't believed he died man he was so awesome I will surely miss him for what had done to make RWBY
The Crazy Saeko chapter 7 . 2/2/2015
RIP Monty, you will be missed and your work was great :(
Prinplup64 chapter 6 . 1/27/2015
I find this very entertaining
Ann E. Casap chapter 6 . 1/24/2015
No! No more alcohol!
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