She should have left her room earlier, not waiting all this time. I didn't expect this kind of behaviour by Irene. I thought she really cared for Elsa, no matter what.

I kind of like your story but I hate how you treat Anna here, and how bad Elsa is. In some parts it seemed that Elsa was in love with Anna (and I, as an Elsannna shiper, tought it was an Elsanna) but no. Elsa wants Anna to kill herself. Really? It's kind of upsetting. Anna doesn't seem bad at all. Why would Elsa wish her death?
Keep writting anyway.

Very interesting and dark version of Frozen, I like it! now that Hans is there I 'd like their plan in action. Update soon!

the story just worsen up my day..

thank you so much for wasting my time

Please update more chapters than ten.

Wow, this story is intense! Nicely done!

no words can express how much i love this story also my name is irene so woot for irene

Update more often