Gran is hysterical!

Amazing story

Loved this story!

I love Gran; she has a wicked sense of humour!

Sadly, when a fic has an error in the first damn sentence, I don’t read. Too bad. I was looking forward to it. Get a beta.

Fantastic! Loved it!

Loved it!

Love It!

Loved this story alot!

loved the story!

I like it

That was a good ending to a sweet tale. I liked it. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here.

Talk about being distracted. One would think that with how much she wanted this dinner to impress, she would've paid attention to what she was doing. Too much worry, I suppose. I'm glad she talked it all out with him. Although, with what she explained it makes sense why she doesn't let men in. However, nothing in there explained why she was equally standoffish with women. Nothing explained her leaning towards reclusivity.

Seriously? She was that blind to everything? How? They were so close and so happy. There is no way she didn't know how he was feeling. She's too observant to not have known.

Well that was a red hot mess. I immediately knew it was Rosalie. James said that shit on purpose, for what reason, we won't ever know. Why is he even in this story? Just for that comment? She already had enough doubt with her ridiculous low self esteem. Plus, you just had her mother stomp all over her and that already did the trick. Piling on it with James' comment was unnecessary. With what her mother said, and seeing him with Rosalie, that still would've had the same result without the James part. Sometimes, less is more in writing.