YOU STOPPED THERE?!
Please, please continue. This story was actually very enjoyable, and even though you may have thought that the story and romance was going too fast, it actually didn't feel all that badly paced. I also liked this very original story idea, and though that this story was going great, especially in the last chapter. But then you stopped. Please don't stop there! Give us the yaoi! I don't care if you think it's bad, I'm sure it will be fantastic. I just need the ending!

I like! More please

Ooooooo right when it was getting good, too. Well, more good. I really like this, the idea and all, and am interested to see what goes on between Sebastian and Ciel, and maybe even get an explanation as to why Sebastian turned on nincompoopy all the sudden. Unless it was already obvious... If thats the case, oops. But anyway yeah, ill be here. Waiting. c:

Good writting thanks for let us read more

I'm so happy with this update and Jesus Sebastian in police uniform Yes please!

really good and adorable

so theres a maylene and a mey-rin? how come sebastian is still single!

I love angry Sebastian! I would be mad too if someone went to me house in those circunstances but so cute he helps him to get food

I think your story is great, but it is a little unclear who's thinking what, so if you would write like "Sebastian pov" or such when you chance pov, it would be awesome! ;*

aw we know deep down Sebastian that you couldnt take Ciel off your mind the exact sec you saw him for the first time

God dammit Sebastian why you have to be so hot! I can't stop thinking in those arms now u.u and lol at cupcake I can totally picture him giving his cats those kind of names. well this chapter was actually much better than previous two there was a big improvement

sebastian is such a teaser I love him and of course he's not gonna let Ciel starve to death

Lol I got nervous the whole moment like if I was there

I think this is such a great story! keep up the good work

I love this idea! Please continue on with it :)