| Reviews for An Unexpected Thing |
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Leafey chapter 24 . 7/17 This story is so beautiful, I want to cry that it’s unfinished. Do you ever think of posting those Sox finished chapters? I’ll be the first to read them if you ever do. I need to know what happens with her and Aro and if she ever finds out that she’s mates to not just him, but all three brothers. Also, where are the wives in this story? Maybe you already mentioned it and I’m not remembering...hmm. Beautifully written and the character development is on point. Please finish! |
wale37 chapter 24 . 5/21 This story is marvelous and your characters are awesome...I don’t really know what else to say beside thank you for sharing it |
shirley chapter 9 . 3/25 i love your story! dont quit! |
Guest chapter 23 . 3/23 I love how you write I hope you update soon |
QueenCandyy chapter 23 . 2/11 I am confused how come she's not pregant yet from her wild sex with aro in is this a just Aro/OC story |
leward1992 chapter 24 . 12/16/2019 Just found this story and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. Ugh so deliciously well written. Can’t wait to see what happens! |
B.N.Bennett chapter 1 . 12/8/2019 Looove |
eeeeaud chapter 9 . 12/4/2019 I just read the author's note for this Chapter. This story is really good so far, like I am supposed to be going out for lunch and I am reading this instead because I can't put it down good. I am excited to see what comes next, even if the story is unfinished. |
Guest chapter 24 . 2/24/2019 I wanna know what happenssss it’s so good |
Hats24 chapter 24 . 1/1/2019 I like it. :) |
Big Sexy Beans chapter 24 . 10/4/2018 Wow. I need to first start by saying THANK YOU. Thank you for gracing us readers with this wonderful piece of writing. I've dabbled in and out of Twilight fanfiction over the years (previously, I was only ever interested in the wolves!). It wasn't until this past year that I fell in love with the three vampire kings. Let me tell you, I've searched high and low for a decently written story with the Kings in character and an actual likable/relatable/realistic OC. You not only hit the mark on all three of those things, but what's unique about your writing is that you fleshed out the Kings' characterizations even further in your own original way while still keeping them in character, as well as all of the other members of the Volturi. It just makes them and the story that much more interesting. I was instantly hooked with the very first chapter. Your writing style is just-ah! It's wonderful. Your characterization is so spot on and makes every character intriguing. The flow of the story keeps me wanting more and more. And you even have more of a plot thrown in there that isn't solely about the brothers finding their mate! How wonderful to find a Volturi story with a interesting plot. I love Jennifer and Emaline, and I love their unique relationships with each of the Kings. I seriously can not get enough of reading about all of their relationships. I love them all! And now I notice that it's almost been a year since you've last updated :( I desperately hope that this story isn't abandoned-it can't be! I've finally just discovered it! The only actual decent Twilight fanfiction worth reading (at least, as far as stories concerning the Kings go). I completely devoured every chapter and fell further in love with each of the brothers. You've without a doubt ruined me for all other Volturi stories on this site. So it goes without saying that I hope your muse returns to you and that we might be lucky enough to be blessed with more of your writing. I'll be over here, patiently (or maybe not so patient) waiting for more chapters. Sincerely, A very huge fan of yours. |
rina499 chapter 1 . 9/11/2018 please update! I'm dying here! Your story is so much better than any Twilight story I've read! Please please please update soon! |
DeathlyIsabelle chapter 24 . 7/18/2018 Damn, this story is perfect. I love how you displayed the kings, I love your OCs and I most likely adore the dynamics between the kings and Jennifer. Honestly I can not wait for Cain's to make a move on her. I like that you have included sex in the story cuz vampires are territorial and primal creatures (as explained in Breaking Dawn), but you have also given her enough time to first have an emotional relationship with Are before jumping into the hot stuff like some authors do. I like the plot and the fact that there is more to the story than the kings finding their mate and the Cullen's creating problems. You have created your own realm and I truly enjoy reading about it. The only thing that worries me is the fact that you have not updated in quite some time. Now I do not wish to be annoying but I beg of you, continue writing this masterpiece. Lots of love... |
Crezir chapter 24 . 5/19/2018 This story is great. When are you going to update? |
Diana Veronica Suciu chapter 24 . 2/28/2018 I love this story! It's exactly as I imagine the Volturi to be ! Please update soon! |