| Reviews for The Brave, The Strong, and The Broken |
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   Akire Rosales chapter 7 . 7/8/2019 Wait whaaaaat? Is this fic on going? I got notified and was like “I don’t remember this fic...” then went on to search for it and wham! Ohhh is the CroMa sundae sparkled with CroPatty! I must have some! So yeah, thanks for updating! I’m following this story closely! My favorite part is you making Maka die of jealousy with Patty muahaha you don’t see that in CroMa fics rly! You’re totally right, most CroMa is all about Crona head over heels for Maka, and Maka totally oblivious of it. So, the change is such a nice breath of fresh air! I must say, more CronaXPatty scenes should be encouraged to spark Maka’s feelings. That would be awesome! Because jealous Maka should be a thing! Keep on updating! You got a reader in me! |
| TrigunInferno chapter 7 . 7/7/2019 Im glad your updating again |
| KilikDaTruth chapter 7 . 7/7/2019 I can’t believe I actually got the notification for this story but yea please give us mo chapters |
| PyroNyzen chapter 7 . 7/5/2019 looking forward to another chapter, i re-read the older chapters once again too |
| Yellowpikmin88 chapter 7 . 7/4/2019 Holy cow! I didn't think I'd see an update to this. What a nice surprise, thank you |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/11/2018 Por favor continuarlo |
| TrigunInferno chapter 6 . 8/22/2017 god damn it please this story is so good please continue this story |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/11/2017 Lame and Stupid Character bashing |
| wave chapter 6 . 8/3/2016 loved it~! buhh can you please continue the "Danganronpa all the fluff" story!XD |
| bigbook29 chapter 6 . 7/14/2016 Please, please, PLEASE continue this story. I really want to see what happens for Crona and Maka! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/6/2016 Not bad, liked it for the most part, especially Crona talking about why he loves Maka and vice versa, but there are two details that could've been improved in the love scene. 1 We didn't actually get a description of Crona removing Maka's clothes, which is weird considering that him pleasuring her seems to indicate they're off. 2 (This is more personal taste) It would've been nice to have more description from Maka on how Crona's naked bod felt when Maka kissed him (I know, I'm lustful XD) Anyways, other than that, great fun chapter, hope to see more. |
| JakeDragon13 chapter 6 . 7/8/2016 It was just getting good too. XD |
| That idiot from 2011 chapter 6 . 7/5/2016 Yeah, I do agree with you, it's usually Crona that confesses to Maka. Congrats on breaking the mold. I've actually been wondering where this been, but... kinda forgot about it since it really has been a while. Time to actually follow it now. xT |
| Emarin Cero chapter 5 . 5/10/2016 The only "complaint" that I have is that I have to wait for the next chapter. haha Every chapter thus far has been very entertaining. I don't think you should worry about how long it takes to "get there" and just have fun with the story. Having that said, having a lemon or two in the story, given the goods have been displayed, would be a pleasant surprise for more than just me i believe. ... ...please? All in all, I greatly enjoy your writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Crutchlier chapter 5 . 9/19/2015 WHY U NO UPDATE! This story is really good! |
