Girl... He is literally abusive. You have written a man that is physically and mentally abusive. This is not cute. I hope to dear got its not from experience because this was honestly so scary and hard to even read. I think you may need to go to counseling and see what a real relationship looks like because it aint this

Sooooo he got her drunk and slept with her? He basically raped her.

Good story but Caroline sounds like a girl with no self esteem. I couldn't even continue the story. Klaus was horrible

Good story!

How can he not see that he treats her almost exactly like he says Mikael treats him?

Yes, please write Aflame, I will love and cherish you for it!

bookmarked the sequel

Love this story! I hope you update soon!

Please update soon! Thanks :)

Damn, these cliffhanger! What is she planning to do? How will it affect her and Klaus. Why is Mikeal hell bent on making him marry someone he knows he doesn't like? Is this some kind of revenge for Mikael towards Klaus? Can't he find away to get out of this marriage? Please update soon.

So is going to disappear and hopefully with something of his besides a tie. Then he will find her and their baby

I think there's going to be a few years jump. And when they meet again klaus will be married and probably Caroline will be raising klaus's child alone about whom he knows nothing about.

OMG...YOU ARE SO SWEET..AWW! AND NOOOO CAROLINE CAN'T DO THIS TO KLAUS! I HOPE KLAUS WON'T LET CAROLINE WALK AWAY FROM HIM LIKE THIS! WHEN WILL HE TELL CAROLINE THAT THEY WERE FRIENDS IN THE PAST! UGH THIS FIC IS GETTING INTENSE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Arrgh! You're killing me here :-(

I hope they run away together!