Either fuck the rewrite and continue this or get your rear in gear. One thing I noticed about rewrites is that authors tend to loose interest after a short while do to a subconscious desire to not repeat all the hard work they originally put in, even if their is several differences scattered throughout. I gets too boring. So the best thing to do is a major edit of chapters or add a new chapter between old ones rather than starting over.

If you still insist on a new Story then cut and paste the Chapters you are satisfied with.

Home on man... Every body knows that Qrow owns a super badass Shotgun-Sword-Scythe, not a super strange Hammer-Sniper-Scythe. Get with the times man! Also totally OOC for sure. I like this one though. He's not as awesome as the real deal, but he's way more funny.

Nooo! Whhhyyy! I bet you error this before watching season 2. If so, then I forgive you, if not, then I get to continue to make fun of you light heartedly. Please let me know if you want me to stop though, I just find it really funny and awesome. Thanks!

Nooo. It's Taiyang Xiao Long... To funny!

I can see Yang and Taiga having another battle with each other in the future on more friendly terms.

I do like this story, but since it been over a year I have to ask, is it still ongoing?

Dead?

Huh,did not see that coming..I am actually speechless XD

I have nothing wrong with het... but as a bisexual female that leans more to the lesbian side I say yuri for the win! XD 3

Is your Qrow related in any way to the Valkyrie family... Nora in particular...?

Please don't give this up!

You know, it's usually a good idea to get the first chapter of any rewrite posted BEFORE posting about making a rewrite in the first place, you dumpkopf. Get to work, and get this rewrite of yours up and running posthaste!

I read the summary and was like, "IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW!"

when the new rewrite is up, please update a notice here so we know about it than the need to search for it. thanks in advance.

And I stop here. I really liked the premise, Naruko is Yang, but your grammar and the fast paced story is what really stopped me from finishing the fic. Some words are capitalized when they shouldn't and there are words where there shouldn't. Again, I liked the idea and the way you were telling it, but both grammar and pace put me off. I hope you continue, but perhaps you should find someone to proof-read and edit your stories. If only so it's easier to read.