I am glad that at least in fanfiction Sakura is inmume to genjutsu. I mean, it would have been so simple to insert this little detail in the real story! Really! I was feed up with the weak way they portray sakura and this fanfic made my day. Thank you!

Cheers to the new ANBU!
Our kunoichis didn't have any progress when it comes to skills. So glad FF is created
Part 2 maybe?

Wow.. This is really an awesome fic.. Off to go read NaruHina part .. :3

please continue QwQ its very very very very very very very very very ...awesome story that i have been looking for

You should make a sequel. What happens after this? Does Sakura get with Sasuke?
And then the other one you have with Naruto and Hinatas POV, do they FINALLY have sex?

Sequels woman! Sequels!

That was insanely hot *fans herself* oh wow! I'd really love to read more about how Sakura's life is going to change with the Uchiha in it ;) So please think about it!

I am not usually a SasuSaku fan, but wow! This fic kept me glued to the page the whole time. The pacing is excellent, as is the writing itself. It flows continuously wihout an awkward breaks and all while staying true to charscter and detail. I actually kind of hope that you will consider making a sequal.

That was a wonderfull piece of writing. Great work

AH! NO! THIS CAN'T BE COMPLETE! It's so cool, I want to read moooooore! *pouts*

Loved it very well written! I know you said one-shot but could you maybe pretty please write naruto and hinata's version? Pretty please!

This was an awesome story! I really enjoyed your writing style- how you really set the scene and characters without going into too much (since this is just a one-shot). I also really liked the pacing of the story and your general use of both imagery and vocabulary to tell the tale. Finally, I thought the sex scene was very well written and not vulgar like most PWP- instead you wrote the scene very well and with TASTE. I thoroughly appreciated that and in the end this story has become one of my favorite Sasuke/Sakura stories.

Overall, you are a fine writer and I look forward to reading some of your other stories. I appreciate you taking the time to write such a wonderful story and sharing it with us.

P.S. Any thoughts on doing a companion story but from Hinata's perspective with Naruto? I think that would be another great read seeing as how Hinata's character is usually so meek and Naruto is the complete opposite with has brashness. I think that would be another fun read.

Love it :3

U should make a chapter saying what happened between hinata and naruto

Why is this sexist?

...I WOULD say something about the whole sex as a tool to gain leverage here, but they didn't expect it either so...Yeah, kind of kinky. Still hot.