No lo se,es una forma que me parece mas bien absurda de combinar ambas sagas,pero ademas de ciertos desperfectos detalles como este,tu Fanfiction podria ser una obra decente,buena,quizas hasta de pronto excelente

Wish you had a continue this was good would have liked to see more of it

I was wondering if you're going to continue this story

This whole thing was awesome, are there any more parts after this or did you stop doing these ? If there are more then please link me to them.

Your timeline makes no sense, and looks like a deliberate stomp of ME to try to make them align. It might be forgivable if your timeline were well written, but it's not.

Problem 1: In ME canon, the Leviathans are over a billion years old and so are the Reapers. Nerfing them to make the Forerunners more competitive without compromising the Halo stuff makes you look biased.

Problem 2: You wanted a 10 million year timeline, but skipped over 99 percent of it. This makes your timeline suck.

Problem 3: You have an event at 109,000 BCE, then say the Forerunners ruled for tens of thousands of years, then in 103,000 BCE you have them being almost wiped out and firing the Halos. 6,000 years is not tens of thousands. To barely qualify as tens of thousands would require a minimum of 20,000 not 6,000! This makes your timeline make no sense.

Any one of the three problems would make your story painfully bad, but having all three makes it something to avoid like the plague.

it has been four years since this was last updated either your busy with life or your possibly in the beyond realm

I don't see why the humans in this are bothered by AI. The humans in mass effect have no problem with them and Joker's only bothered by EDI because he feels like EDI reduces his purpose on the ship and sidelines him. He changes his mind later. No one else gives a damn about AI one way or the other. The other species of ME fear AI solely because the Council tells them to. The human way of looking at it is "You say we should fear AI just because you suck at making them? HA! No." Which, as EDI proved, we are full capable of making without any problems. The only reason she caused trouble on the Lunar base (in which she did not harm anyone) was because she woke up early before she was complete. A test that went out of control. Really stupid to activate her before she was finished. I mean seriously. It isn't our fault the ME species' consistently build their AI to actively want to kill organics. They only do what they are programmed it do and the way they are programmed to do it, after all.

Update

Good start.

Its been a while, still in Chapter 10?

id pay for more.

How is ship number a problem when a single seed ship needs only a few hours to build an entire ship from the land? They can just find a planet drop a few thousand seeds then boom, instant fleet just add ancilla. I also don't get why you increased reaper strength or lessened the forerunner power? The entire reaper fleet could shoot at a single forerunner ship and it wouldn't even scratch the paintjob.

Your grammar is horrible. You make horrible plot divices and don't give a reason to the shitty ones you have. Why would he be so interested in one human. None of that makes any sense. Learn how to make actual sense before you try writing another story, because this one is shit.

Need more, please keep going! This is great stuff.

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