| Reviews for Fear of Thunder |
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QRSTUV chapter 1 . 11/23/2014 Talk about tough love. Great job! Lily's fear of thunder is so hilarious when he's all bulky! I never thought of it that way before. |
Draconicdisciple chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 I really liked this one! Like really! You did a good job in all aspects. I especially like how the characters were written and interacted with each other. Like how Gajeel kept giving Cana different nicknames. Panther lily was a lot of fun too with comments like "I'm not sure I follow your logic as well I do your fighting style" I started laughing at that moment. I'm a huge fan if GaLe, so that was a nice little bit as well when you have that small reference. There was a line that was "Gajeel agreed and explained" there's nothing wrong with it, it just sounded off and a lot like one dialogue tag to me. But I couldn't find any errors! Thanks for writing another story! I love your exceed features stories. |
RicardianScholar Clark-Weasley chapter 1 . 5/25/2014 A very cruel method but I liked the caring side of Gajeel you showed. |