Good thing that Amy was there to help. good story

another story about Face. You got there emotion down well. And the friendship they have built up. I am goings with Amy still. She seems just right to be able to get through to Face.

I am guessing she got through b/c they like each other.

Hey, this was really nice. You did a great job creating the characters of the guys and I liked your strategy of having the girl be unnamed-that way she really didn't seem like a Mary Sue. Great job! Can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Nicely done.

Love this! Reminds me of my novella NIGHTMARE back in '88. Always love gritty POW memories stuff; delving beneath the silliness to see the real situations. Bravo!

I LOVE IT.
GOOD JOB.

Stick sticking with Amy on this one. It makes a change to get an insight of the team's friendship and suffering through the eyes of someone else. Interesting and descriptive dialogue with regards to the Vietnam era. Good job!