Reviews for The Fever Dream
Lucy chapter 24 . 4/18
I'm in loveeee with this story. The bitter angst undertone is just so amazing and delicious. I hope u come back to the story : )
Guest chapter 24 . 2/14
Love the story. Hopefully you'll come back to it one day.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/31
Very intriguing
RougishLady chapter 18 . 1/31
My heart broke
RougishLady chapter 8 . 1/30
Sobbing
RougishLady chapter 5 . 1/30
The ending is almost scary
RougishLady chapter 4 . 1/30
Omg I just want to grab hold of you and hug you! This writing is a gem
Canela19 chapter 9 . 11/13/2019
Actually Sakura's love is superficial, and it is canon (gaiden). She didn't know if Sasuke wore glasses
Canela19 chapter 8 . 11/8/2019
Dos hijos? ESO fue brutalmente directo jaja. Me encanta!
Canela19 chapter 6 . 10/27/2019
Wow It is very interesting. I love the development that you are giving to all the characters.
KookiePie1025 chapter 24 . 8/3/2019
A very good read. You really take time in character formation. Love the the timeline breaks. It makes reading the story more interesting, challenging...

It’s still a one-sided SasuHina...but I’m fine with the pacing. I do want Hinata to start getting her act together. I feel for Sasuke. I hope he gets the love he so long for from Hinata.

Please update soon! Thanks for the wonderful writing.
Genieva chapter 24 . 7/28/2019
This story is so amazing. I started it yesterday and now I’m dying for more. It’s really different, I like the angle that’s being developed. The complete immersion into a character, that really leaves you guessing where there mind is going. Stories like this are harder to write, read but they’re more raw and authentic and make you want to keep figuring them out. Please continue!
Guest chapter 24 . 6/30/2019
Gosh. I can't believe how good this story is. At first I thought it would be a simple SasuHina fic, but man I was wrong. It became so dark and depressing but oh so good that I couldn't stop reading it. From 8 pm until 6:45 am I read all 24 chapters and didn't stop.

So here are my thoughts. I feel really sorry for Hinata. I can't imagine the pain of having an ability so important to me being taken away against my will. So I understand her depression and her anger towards Naruto and Sasuke. And I think her hate for Naruto is so severe not just because of what he did to her, but moreso that he's the one who'd done it to her. For Sasuke, it's anger and confusion maybe? Of course she's angry at him, but also she's confused as to how to treat him because of Itachi and because of Sasuke's love for her. At first I seriously hated Sasuke for doing that to her, but getting to know his story I started to empathize with his feelings, with him losing a lot of important people, he'd want to keep the people that he loves safe, especially knowing that he has the ability and the strength to keep them safe, compared to when he was younger when he didn't have control over the situation and he didn't have a choice. As for Naruto, he's the Hokage so really, what can he do but make the tough decisions that will benefit the village. Lastly, I think this story is slowly turning into a lesbian situation.

Anyway, super love this fic so please don't give up on this story.
H A M B O . 1 7 chapter 21 . 2/26/2019
I'm really shipping SakuHina rn.
H A M B O . 1 7 chapter 15 . 2/26/2019
I feel the Shoujo Ai vibes stronger in this chappy.
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