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Spartan804 chapter 10 . 6/13 It's a real pity that this story has never ended, because I really liked it so far! |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/4/2017 As Claire opens The door and see... PHIL DUNPHY: "Hi, Honey I'm Back!" Everybody in The Dunphy Household got happiness and Joy At last and along with Luke Dunphy. LUKE DUNPHY: Hey You Guys got our Daddy Back and The home famÃlia again. CLAIRE DUNPHY: Yes, Luke God FOR You and there's no One problem to solve. On that table there's One sheet of paper to bring here to me and I'll Call Uncle Mitchell to resolve The problem and it's going to happen Tomorrow. CLAIRE DUNPHY: "To Viewers" We All Hope for the new results by Tomorrow and We all Must Cross Your Fingers to tryout and hoping for the bust and making it from the worst. Tuesday December 10, 2013 at 11:00 AM at the DNA Diagonastic Center in L.A., CA as The Modern Family Awaits for the new test results from the old results as Phil Dunphy concentrates on the same test without His own clowning around and foolishness too and he's doing His best to do so for Haley's True Daddy of Claire's Existing Real Marriage. By 11:30 AM He's Finished both Gently and Carefully Fast and give it to the Test Examiner. Meanwhile, Phil's Modern Family are awaiting to call on for results THE TEST EXAMINER: Okay, Everybody Come in Now. Today is The Big Moment for all of You and after making the final calculations are correct and this time is now. When it Comes to 18-Year-old Miss Haley Gwendolyn Clarissa Patricia Dunphy? Phillip Harold Howard Humphrey Francis Allen Dunphy...Congratulations, YOU ARE THE FATHER of Haley Gwendolyn Clarissa Patricia Dunphy and now she's 19 Years Old Today and come on out Haley? HALEY DUNPHY: Hey, What's Going On? CLAIRE DUNPHY: Haley, Don't You Know The Good News? HALEY DUNPHY: No, What? PHIL DUNPHY: The DNA Test Results are resolve and perfectly right. I Am Your Father, Haley Gwendolyn Clarissa Patricia Dunphy, Forever! HALEY DUNPHY: What You're Kidding Me? OMG, I Can't Believe it, You're My Dad Forever, Yes, WOW! Haley & The Renewal Father Phil Dunphy are hugging together for The 1st Time in 19 Days and later today into tonight...They'll Going to be A Really Big Party Celebration for both Phil Dunphy's A Father Again and Celebrate Haley's 19th Birthday at Harold's Restaurant (LOL AHA!) and As The Dunphys Arrived at Harold's Restaurant to Take the whole family table and the presents are all displayed for Phil & Haley they all to see the full decorations and reading the 2 banners are both says "Congratulations Phil Dunphy on being to renewing as Haley's Father & Happy 19th Birthday Haley." HALEY DUNPHY: (softly) WOW! I Can't Believe they did this for us. CLAIRE DUNPHY: No, Haley, We Called our reservation for both of You including your father Phil my Husband are suppose to be a surprise, Come on. As The Dunphys Walk Onto The Table and Haley said HALEY DUNPHY: Hi, Waiter Bill. WAITER BILL: Oh, Hi Haley & Dearest Dunphy family and here's your table. THE DUNPHYS: Thank You. WAITER BILL: Um, By The Way Where's The Rest of Everybody? PHIL DUNPHY: Oh, They All Got own early projects, Waiter Bob because it's my daughter Haley's 19th Birthday tonight and I'm The New Proud Father Reinstated earlier today. WAITER BILL: Oh, Congratulations I'm Proud of You & Haley and I'll Be Right Back. HALEY DUNPHY: Well, Dad, Waiter Bill is nice to us and I'm glad you come back to me and to all of... THE MODERN FAMILY: everybody runs faster to yell out loud "SURPRISE!" and cheers & applause to Haley. HALEY DUNPHY: "Surprised" WOW! You Guys never able to come here. GLORIA PRITCHETT: Well, Haley We've Thought We Never Able to be here after your father passes the DNA TEST and resulted as your real parent, real father... MANNY DELGADO-PRITCHETT: Your Real & True Daddy's name Haley is Phillip Harold Howard Humphrey Francis Allen Dunphy. HALEY DUNPHY: Phil Dunphy is my true Daddy? MANNY DELGADO-PRITCHETT: Yes it is, Haley it's true. PHIL DUNPHY: Haley, you're looking at me & myself ace it and I'm Showing you all the results of The DNA Test. "As The Renewal Reinstated Father of Haley's giving out the same test what he'd pass suceessfully on the DNA test and she sees and smiled and thrilled and founded 100% Outstanding Work of Accomplishment and finally it became true." HALEY DUNPHY: Dad, You Did it! "Yells of Happiness" YES, ALRIGHT, DADDY DID IT & DAD ACED IT EVERYBODY. MITCHELL PRTICHETT & CAMERON TUCKER: Hey, Fellas Let's Hear it as just like at the testing Office. THE MODERN FAMILY: For They Are Jolly Good Couple 3x, Which Nobody Can Deny 3x, F 3x and Slow it down to W 1x. Cheers & applause as Waiter Bill bring out the cake & candles with the number 19 by the way it's Haley's 19th Birthday sings by The family "Happy Birthday to You, Happy Birthday to You, Happy Birthday. Desar Haley, Happy Birthday to You" and asking her own speech. HALEY DUNPHY: Well You Guys, I Appreciate You All coming here for the Big Moment of our lives for both my 19th Birthday and the reclaiming of my Dad, Phil Dunphy since today that morning when he became my real & true dad Phil Dunphy and passed with flying colors into an Golden Ace and we look forward for the future for me, my dad & all of us and again, Thank You. Applause. HALEY DUNPHY: To Veieres "Well To All The 20 Terrible Days of my Life and finally accepte as the true legitimate daughter of the true Reinstated Daddy Phil Dunphy & my mom Claire and all my family & Friends looking me or not and Hey that's my problem for all of my Life and They Made me & my dad & my family resolen that DNA Test Worked Successfully for him, My Dad Phil Dunphy is really real & true to me ONCE more and Thank You to know & understand about us. This is Haley Gwendolyn Clarissa Patricia Dunphy aka Haley D. Signing off, Ciao. THE END. |
coco8891 chapter 10 . 9/19/2017 I really like this story and even though I has been a year you should update it |
Cat Feral chapter 10 . 4/9/2017 I hope there's going to be more of this! I love how even when Phil is more hurt and angry than he's ever been in his life, he still uses amusing euphemisms for curse words! Phil kept demanding who the other potential father was. I'm pretty sure Claire told him in the college reunion episode that she'd had a little "thing" with her professor; why didn't she just tell him it was the Prof? Was she afraid Phil was going to go after the guy? |
Cat Feral chapter 1 . 3/8/2017 This is off to a good start. (I'll be honest, if Claire's kept the secret this long, I don't see why the sudden pressure to "come clean", unless she thinks Haley might need a transplant of some kind in the near future... ) I really like the way you've worked the "interview" scenes (if that's the right word) into your story just as they have them in the TV show. I wouldn't have thought to do that. Well done! I'm off to read more! |
TheEpicKen chapter 3 . 12/28/2016 OMFG LUKE IS A BRONY |
anonguy5 chapter 10 . 8/21/2016 I've never really written any reviews before, but that was fantastic! If I had one issue, it seems a bit weird that Phil is only concerned about Luke. I know they have a special bond, but usually Phil shows concern for his daughters as well as Luke, so it seems a bit OOC. Great writing |
Fansquealing chapter 10 . 7/3/2016 Whaaaa!? I can't believe ya left off there. Anyway, I LOVE this and can't believe I didn't find it sooner. Please update SOON! :)))))) |
Guest chapter 10 . 6/1/2016 Why the fuck is phil being a little wimpy bitch, his whore trash wife cheated on him and he just got his ass lied to for 20 years, you don't forgive shit like this in real life, you divorce immediately |
cooopercrisp chapter 10 . 5/1/2016 I really hate that there's no way to respond directly to guest reviews, but I want to answer The Senator's most recent review so I hope they eventually get to see this. I just want to let people know that I am fully aware I stopped the chapter on a cliffhanger, but the story is nowhere near over. I've taken a break because I'm busy trying to finish my semester at college, but hopefully when I return home I will be able to get back into this story and continue it. I didn't want to leave an impression that the story was ending on a cliffhanger, so hopefully this reaches the Senator and anyone else who may have been wondering about the abrupt ending of Chapter 10. Sorry for the confusion, and thanks for the support. |
The Senator chapter 10 . 5/1/2016 This was actually a great story, with endless possibilities, however, I feel the end was very UNSATISFYING and extremely anti-climactic. |
Guest chapter 10 . 4/5/2016 Great story cannot wait for more |
Obsidian chapter 10 . 3/26/2016 I've never read a story based on MF before, but yours is great. You captured all of the character's personalities perfectly and managed to make a situation as delicate as this include lots of humor. Kudos! |
crazy-wild-and-free chapter 9 . 3/17/2016 Aw! Haley and Andy's first date and first kiss were the best! Dylan not included. lol. I'm all caught up now so I hope you'll be updating again soon! |
crazy-wild-and-free chapter 8 . 3/17/2016 So now everyone knows...and family therapy may or may not be a go. Hmm...I wonder how it will all turn out?! |