I loved this. The chemistry between them was nicely captured and true to character.

Hmm. More please.

Very nice, detailed writing. I'd like to see a little more detail certain breaks; for instance, instead of using "Minutes later", give us what is happening in those minutes. Constant body movement and build makes action scenes more intense. Overall this is quite hot.

The only thing Cara ever does in fiction is go down on Kahlan, never penetrates her. Kahlan craved Richard's sword pretty hard. I don't think she would mind being "stabbed" by Cara.

so short and yet so hot!
a nice small moment for the ladies; loved when cara made that compliment to kahlan about her being sexy in a fight. totally mord'sith kind of compliment! and totally mord'sith kind of reward!
thanks for sharing

hot! loved it :)

Perfect. Kahlan and Cara for ever.