Very entertaining fic. I think that Eidolon kid is kind of stupid for not asking more questions though. He already knew they had to be keeping things from him. Never posted flyers or anything to help him find his family. Did he not find that weird? And to suddenly have someone love him so!? Come on kid. It's not like they didn't have the money to do it. And then have guns and creature like people around? Ok. Now that I wrote it, he was where he was suppose to be. With stupid people!

AYEEEEW MONGOLIA HOW HOWS MY HOMETOWN DOIN

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For the people who don't know: she is already writing the second one. It's under her username.
Here's a link I hope it works: s/10516608/1/
This story is so good!

Omg this is so amazing! Please don't make us wait for the rest how can you do this to your loving readers!?

I love this story so much and I'm so sad right now it'll end so soon... And in the sequel, are Eidolon and Eve really gonna get together? I really hope not. But, eh, it's your story and I'm still gona read it, regardless about what you write. It's still awesome. But seriously? I don't particularly like Eve and it's not just because she's the 'bad guy' in this story... it's just there. I dunno. Maybe it's just because it's 5a.m. here and I haven't slept for about 2 days now and my brain is nope'ing on me and causing me to ramble. Maybe. Probably. Yeah. Sigh. Anyway, sorry for wasting your time*coughnotreallycough*
Update soon and good luck!

Truth be told, i kinda wanted to see Eidolon meet up ith Kida. I seriously want to know if they are going to be friends, acquaintances or enemies especially since Kida doesnt even like Izaya. And if they dont like each other, then have 'em get in a fight! *shakes fist in air* Kida could probably start it because he is jealous ove the fact that Eidolon is able to atract all the ladies? maybe Shizuo would break them up because Eidolon doesnt want to use his strength!

Either way, i hope you upfate super soon!

to cute

Awwww! I actually wasn't expecting an update! Especially so soon! Ah, but now the real struggle begins! I wonder how school will be like. Will Omega, Eve and Tyrone return? Will Eidolon make any friends? Will Kida be an a-hole to him? Does Anri count as a Dandere *wink wink*? And does anyone bully him because of his relationship with Izaya and Shizuo?

Please, update! Even if its a surprise like chapters 25-27?

Ahhhhh! You son of a gun! *grabs you and swings you around* you scared th living daylights out of me! Here i was thinking of horrible things happening and the only people to die were Joseph nd Fox face...okay, fox face was pretty bad, but still! Hah, and Greenland!? And here i was hoping for something closer to Japan. *waves Japanese flag*
but now i have to wonder, are the two groups going to travel together? Are they going to seperate? What will happen to Fierce, since he isnt really close to anyone? Will the cops actually be cops?
And the one thing that has been bothering me since chapter 21 when i looked back through the chapters: how the hell did they go to he bathroom!? Never once have you mentioned a toilet in their cell nor in the group dome thingy. So...where did all that food go? O_O;

Anyways, dont mind my blathering! Update soon again! Use that library for all its worth!

Now I'm even more impatient to find out what'd happen next. I knew that there was more to Kasuka-Eidolon that met the eye. I felt it somehow.
And so, I'm waiting for the next update. :)

Wow, I didn't think that one of the OSI workers would be someone to help them out of there. Seems logical though.
Oh, I so can't wait for the great escape.:D

Why!? Why must the writing gods be so cruel!?
But i do like the idea of the doctor helping them escape. I just want yo ask you to make sure that Eidolon doesnt go outside until they escape. I feel like it should be a magical moment and it wouldnt be if he's already seen the sky and the sun and stars already.
Tell your Papa Bear that I give you permission to use the computer! If that doesnt work, then i'll distract 'em while you get to typing! Deal?

oh hell no. save them from psychos please.

Oh wow... This story is really great. Truly Kickass great. The plot that you have conceived is just so good and I can't wait to see what you do with it. Really, you've done a great job so far with this story. I love the way you are portraying the characters, not to ooc, but just enough to make it fit with the plot line. I love the whole family dynamic you have created. It's pretty rare to find, but I love it when an author writes it well. Your writing is pretty smooth, and it's easily readable. It could do for some more imagery to add overal depth in my personal opinion, so keep it in mind when you type up the next chapter. Another criticism would be that sometimes you make the plot points a little too convenient. I'm specifically referring to how Celty and the gang found out it was Omega behind everything. I just thought using the poster was a little cliche. It's just a personal opinion so please don't feel offended you are the author after all;). Alright so about the breakout ideas...
Uh you could always put someone on inside, like a dollars member. Oh maybe you could have Shrina's father working with Omega. Though I doubt Shrina's father would help out of the kindness in his heart, maybe Shrina could convince him. So far you haven't really introduced us to any other clone groups, so if you plan to use one of them to break our family trio out, you might want to spend a chapter or two developing their characters. Remember these will be OCs, so you have to avoid Marysue-ness and make them likable! Please no boring OCs. I don't think this will be a problem for you though because all the OCs of have introduced so far are complex and not paper cut.
That's it for now, I will definitely await next chapter. Also! Never get down for not having a lot of reviews. All great stories have to start somewhere and even though it might not seem like it their are people like me who love your story!
With that- Keep Writing!
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