This os a fantástic history so please continue it
And good look with everything that its happening in your life

Love it, can't wait for the next chapter.

Sind sie das essen? Nein, wir sind die jäger!

I'm glad you've gotten back into it, I missed the story. It definitely still has a lot of action, which I love and the RangikuxDaichi romance hasn't been shoved down my throat, which is a really nice change! So phew!

As much as I hate to see a story end and I really hate to say this, but if you're not finding the motivation or if you're struggling, then perhaps it might be time to think about wrapping this particular story up and maybe try focusing or developing a brand new ideas, something which inspires you again.

Danm, Kurotsuchi is such an a**, words can't even describe it.

What does Kasaihime translate to in English?

You're welcome for the reviews so far and yes, a pat on the back to you for reaching 40, now 41, chapters with 50, 000 words!

I feel so sorry for poor Daichi and Rangiku! Just so much drama for them, they never have a moments peace. Which is, like I said before, good for you; it shows you can create relatable characters.

Urgh, I always hated Yamamoto.

I never really saw the Rangiku transformation coming. Loved that twist!

Actually, this chapter was one of my favourites so far! It's really incredible how you can fit so much drama and intrigue into one small chapter (every chapter) and not over-load the reader. But at the same time, there's still a great deal of tension. It's a great skill, so kudos to you!

Well for ending the story ... it depends on what you think would fit and make you happiest.

a) Naturally, you could have a happy ending where Daichi gets the girl and they go on being Soul Reapers together etc.
b) Or there is a whole list of more dramatic/ sad endings where maybe one/ both of them dies.
- i)Something could go wrong with Rangiku's experiment with Kurosutchi and Daichi could be left alone, heatbroken etc.
- ii) Or he could attack Kurosutchi and be executed very sad, but full circle.
c) Or you could go for a much lamer ending like Bleach actually did where ... nothing happened.
I'm sure there are other ways to end it, too but I'm in a little bit of a rush so I'll let your imagination wander away with you.

A sequel could be a great idea ... depending on the plot. I.e. would it be a continuation of this story and we could ... I don't know see what happens after the experiments and what happens to Daichi or would you make it a whole new story to follow Rangiku and Daichi after the Giant Wars? You'd have some real opportunities for major character development there, but as you're not sure how you want this one to end, I can't really give a proper example, but hopefully you understand what I'm trying to say. But if you do a sequel, I think it might be a great idea to introduce some of the other characters and instead focus on a story with Daichi, (Rangiku if she's still around), and maybe someone we didn't get to see here, like Renji, Rukia, Ichigo etc. I know that's a lot of work but challenging the author is always a fun game to play.

And now I'm out of time so good luck ... and if you ever want to run an idea over someone, feel free to PM! :)

Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, I've been really behind for ages but I'm all caught up now!

This is really great. Daichi is so cool, which is saying something because I don't usually like OC's all that much. So I'm really impressed.

The pairing between him and Rangiku is really adorable.

And it's full of action and intrigue, what more could you ask for?

I'm really loving this so great job and please keep up the great work! :D

omg, is this a nod to attack on titans? It sure does sound like it. Though I never personally read or watched attack on titans (too creepy and nasty to me) it seems interesting in this fic. So far so weird.

Are they gonna try to turn Rangiku into a titan?

Please update soon I really love this.

Who should Daichi be paired with? That's a good question. Personally I would go with Rangiku because I've never seen a OCxRangiku Fanfic before. You'd probably be the first to make a fanfic like that.

I have to say, I really respect your writing. You created characters who I connect with. Characters who have flaws. For example: you actually acknowledged that Daichi and Kaien have similar personalities, instead of expecting your readers not to notice. It's nice to have an author who respects my intelligence.

So Daichi is really slow or it's because he is holding back and let Rangiku open the way so he can know where are the root of the tree are and don't stumble ? It's an interessing idea update soon with the chapter 6 ! Good luck !
Sorry English is not my native language.
Linh02

Well you HAVE to continue the story now, I want to know where this is heading!

So far so good, my friend!

Keep it up.