Wow

Love coming back read this story which you would've continued

I'm glad that Alice didn't ignore Mrs. Bella.
Thanks for writing!

Damn. That was hot. You should totally write a multi chapter story like this. Cause you might just have me as addicted to your writing lol.

you have to make a part 3 please

Nice combination of erotic and sweet.

Liked it was hoping for more.

Ugh. I'm in love with this story! There needs to be more futa fics out there! Please, please continue or something.

I think I've fallen in love with the way the pair is portrayed in your story. You've made them a couple I find myself cheering for.
Wonderful, thank you.

Phew that was steamy, awesome job! Loved it, hee hee was blushing through most of it but it still had a small romantic quality to it, not leaving it as just pure smut.

Aw, God, that was hot. Phew. I need to... go get laid...
I love your work. Looking forward to future stuff.

That was... AMAZING!

I must agree with the previous reviewer. I too like the way you write. Thank you for favoring your readers with an addition to "The Beginning". It was an unexpected treat. Thank you again!

I like your way of writing. This is really good, and different, and i appreciate that you decided to add on to your other post ! :) awesome post.