I hope that you come back to both this story and it’s sister fic. at some point. Both are really great!

Oh how I adore your writing! The aside about Jet almost made me snort my wine.

Wow so that’s pretty cool how you decided to add diversity into your story

Fo porter is gorgeous and fits Levy.

I love this AU that you're doing (i'm in the middle of a re-read) and I respect what you're trying to do with making Levy non-white.

Also, the fact that her not being 100% human making her immune system more sensitive makes a ton of sense from a worldbuilding perspective

Hope all is well

To be honest, I didn't want to review since there wasn't any romance or much attraction I had for it at the start, but the fic surprised me. I really liked it. I love how this was somewhat a prequelbackstory for another fic (which I have read, but which name I don't remember, sorry). I love how lovely the relationship between all the characters are, especially between Levy and Natsu. I love how you included additional characters to spice up the plot yet kept with the original plot (like when Lisanna 'died'). This is great! KEEP WRITING STAY INSPIRED don't worry, the Levy you're writing is beautiful!

I completely agree that fairy tail is not just Japanese but a multitude of races and ethnicities. I think the most interesting (and handsomest) outside of Fairy Tail is Arcadios. Pinocchio nose, African American skin, a knight to the princess and he switched the keys in the corupted Celestial arc.

Forgive me for saying this," Alaneo said warily, "but you all seem a bit young to be the correct mages for this job…"

"Yes, yes we are!" Happy said enthusiastically, and Droy facepalmed.

Subtle Phineas and Ferb reference? :D

So in love with your works, not gonna lie!

*screaming* Where is the happy chapter?!
But most importantly: where IS the rest of this adorable fic?!
P.s. FT's whiteness does bother me as well. Some people draw Gajeel with dark skin as well, uuuh, I wonder what he'll look like here! (If u ever decide to continue this story)
Hope life treats you well:)

I have probably read all your stories in two days and I'm on the edge of my seat in anticipation for every one of them - I love artistic lisence!

Excellent chapter! i'm so happy i was finally able to catch up on this one! I'm loving the story and how this story line will tie in to the "Make Your Nest and Lay In It". I'm interested to see how that ends up working out.
The relationship between Erza and Mira starting after Lisanna "died" is also a really good idea and actually pretty plausible. The time being spent when they are young and away from the story line pre- Lucy also gives a lot of opportunity to build a solid story and character outline (sure we know all the characters but it's still an important part of writing that should never be ignored.)
I've gotta say too, i'm LOVING the whole racial differences in the story. It makes a lot of sense when you think about it, laying out the continents in that world as compared to Earthland you're obviously going to have a lot of different races coming together. it's just the way the world is and i'm glad someone is taking the time to think that out.
I really look forward to the next chapter in both this and it's sister story! Keep at it! :D

I'm imagining gajeel and levys kids now. Part fae, part human, and part dragon.

You said the next chapter would be happy, FAIL! There isn't another chapter. Please update!

Wow. You're really making me love the idea of Levy being a half-fae. Oh gosh. I hope Levy would be cured in the next chapter. She doesn't deserve to endure the pain anymore. :(

This chapter was amazing, as they all are. Protective older sibling Fairies are just wonderful. I think it's really great that you're not just going off of canon and making the whole guild white, and freckled Spanish/Desi Levy is now one of my ultimate favourite headcanons. Also Fo Porter i g.

-googles Fo Porter- Dear god...I wish to see a heavily freckled Levy now, I had to giggle when you called Jet a ginger fuck, made my evening. Do you think Gajeel would be Russian as well? I love big sister Erza, It's adorable, can't wait to read the next chapter.