I enjoyed reading your fic. Thank you for sharing.

Now Grim has a reason to bet the ever-living-shit out of Aizen. He should have not involved their not-so-little girl in this. Not to forget, Neil can fight too! This is a really good thing. She can tell her Dad everything that Aizen is doing to Ichigo, because eventually he will slip-up and let his demon loose. Loving it!

Talk about a rock and a hard place. HELP!

So it is Aizen. Should of seen that coming. That man goes out of his way to fuck Ichigo over however he can, whenever he can, for as long as he can. I am enjoying it. I know Aizen gonna get his comeuppance and it's gonna be so good when he do! Loving it.

omg! yessss! you go boi! you hit him hard!

OMG I like your writing style so much! This story almost made me cry! It was so heartbreaking in some parts, even though you didn't write a detailed domestic abuse schene. It was perfect to read on a rainy day. Great job!

Good job Ichigo! *WHISTLES*

I really needed this chapter. I hate everything the Ichigo has been and is going through. I understand the break up better, but it only makes me angry at the two of them for letting it happening in the first place. Ichigo should have told Grimmjow anyway and then asked him to keep the secret as well. Or Grimmjow should have just followed his ass like the possessive man that he is and found out that way. Damn hindsight!

This shit is awesome! I cannot wait for Grimmjow to murder that bitches ass! Aizen, I mean. Not Ichigo; I can wait for the figurative murdering of that ass. The build up is what makes it all worth it!

Amazing! I love it a lot!

This is really great !

Cute story! But I will never feel sorry for Aizen! The plot was great and it kept me reading. Ummm where is Shirosaki and Shinji! And I was seriously hoping for some ByaRen action. Omg Noi and Karen lol does he must really have a death wish! I wish Grimm kicked some major arse, but maybe another time? I always feel like Ichi is definitely capable, but Grimm has a small amount of freakiness!

Your sentence structure has a lot to be desired... its like talking a without breathing lol
Maybe get a beta? I like the idea but damn, don't be all over the place.

Quite frankly you could easily turn this into a published book if you changed the names. It really was fabulous. I stayed up all night in order to finish it in one go.

I am so proud of Ichigo. He finally yav that monster what he deserved! I liked this chapter alot, but I think it may have gone a bit too quickly. BUT it's amazing all the same!