Hello! First of all I would like to thank you for this amazing fanfiction! Really, I love the plot, the story is great! I'm so happy to have found a long Tsudoka fanfiction with a great plot.
I thought about criticizing your work a little, I'm no professional that's for sure but there are some things that are bugging me. I'll start with the characters, I think they are all kinda great, Yuu's personality is well drawn, author the last chapter as an example. Now the only character I have a problem with is Tsubasa, I find him a little too OOC. There are many reactions I would never have imagined him have. Tsubasa is a serious, stoic and aloof guy both in appearance and sometimes in heart. If his understanding of his feelings for Madoka came to surface I think it would have manifested in little attentions and blushing instead of clumsy actions. He would also maybe the type of guy who is pretty possessive or jealous. Or maybe just understanding but knows how to control his feelings and emotions as he always had. from the beginning of the story I didn't particularly found him grow in character. Maybe it's just my way of seeing him but I thought of telling you that too! I also have a little problem with Madoka at the beginning, maybe she could have been a little more shy and embarrassed but then again it's only my stupid opinion xD I'm not telling you to right according to my own preferences.
Now, I'm gonna talk about the writing in itself. Writing from an inner point of view is a choice. But I fell kinda weird when I read through fanfictions with chapters cut to change from a pov to another. Even though I know the purpose of it. I don't know if it's something you never thought of, didn't master well or anything but there are many ways to express a pov. Sometimes you can write using she/he instead of "I" while expressing pretty well every characters' emotions, feelings and way of thinking. Last of all, it's really a shame the story moved too fast. As a reader I would have enjoyed reading this story in a more detailed manner. Just take your time writing, putting descriptions and stuff! Well, I guess I've said it all! Remember that's only my opinion! It's up to you whatever is related to your amazing story! Don't be offended please, I didn't mean to be rude! Still, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. You are amazing and you are writing something about my ultimate otp xD I really love your story and I hope you will update soon! Have a great day and many kisses

Well, that didn't end well, did it? I had the feeling Yu wasn't going to understand, but I didn't think it would end like this...

It's good that you didn't make Yu suddenly have a change of heart. He's pretty protective of Tsubasa, so even the hint that someone is going to enter their life would make him upset.

Good job on giving us a fair bit of tension this chapter!

...Well. It appears not everyone is overjoyed about Tsubasa and Madoka being together. I can see where Yu is coming from, though.

This was a good idea to show. It's not just the fact Tsubasa and Madoka are together; it's also that he has basically been told to keep an eye on Cogs and stay out the way. It's not just Yu and Tsubasa now; it's Yu, Tsubasa, Madoka and Cogs. Like a little dysfunctional family, in a way...

Tsubasa, dancing?! Haha, must be a spectacle to see :)
This is not bad for a first romance story. Keep up the good work!

Sorry for not reviewing! Barely had any time to update this afternoon... continue with story! I need obese how Kenta reacts to Ryugas return!

cute and neat! But you really need to update fast! Oh, and could you do a Chris or King's POV? Please?