Omg I loved this story! I don’t know why I didn’t find it sooner! You are so talented!

Why is this story so cute and funny! I'm in love, again! Even after reading it two times already:)

This chapter is SO good! The way the dragons respond to Hiccup's mood and he can shush them with only a look is SO freaking hot! And it's so satisfying to see some sense knocked into Astrid:)

Ooohkay!
Well.
Huh.
That’s a damn twist.

I like how you write. You write as a conduit for the characters, you don’t decide what they do, you just record it.

HUH! Interesting pair in the end of this chapter.
you left a hint of it earlier on (I don't remember what chapter) but I can kind of see it, but also kind of not.

still as good as the first book!
-Jdog4161

I was just basking in the glory of this story, too in awe to even comment but then this chapter ALKSDGHLEIUFGLIKBLEWVCPIY. WHOOOO! Night Furies! Many! WHOOOOOO!

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TAKE THAT, CANON!
I can't even!
I FREAKING LOVE YOU!

Also the image of Toothless trying to introduce Hiccup to his mate is just the most vivid I've seen in SO long and it is SO adorable it's "showing Toothless how to draw" all over again I just can't! UGH!

Also also, Toothless' mate has to find Hiccup's comment "I really hope the kids take after their mom, because their Dad...Hoo Boy!" hilarious. At least as Hilarious as I do and that's basically 100% pure amusement. Change my mind.

I know the ending of this Eddur as it is the second time that I am here. Still good stuff.

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Love this series and this chapter is my favorite battle in any book or fanfiction. I like how the story is split into the three veiwpoints that togethor tell the whole story. Hiccups vision feels real yet at the same time otherworldly. I would like to see this battle from Stoicks view if you ever do oneshots from this story.

I absolutely LOVED this book! Just what I was looking for! Your writing is elegant and just flows. I believe you could be a best selling author one of these days.

HEHEHE I LOVE SNOTLOUT SO MUCH NOW

This awesome great story great fights. The only thing that would have made the fight with the berserkers better is if when it was snotlout's POV he should have said "If I didn't know he was human I would have assumed he was a ghost." But the story is a perfect 10/10

10/10 perfection

Im really glad Snotlout's not being a total dick anymore. i've always thought of him as a joey tribiani type of person(Friends) or at least joey season 1. A bit douchey but with good heart.