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Hello! I am a big fan of your work! I was wondering if you wanted a job as a story artist at Disney Studios. We recently got an opening for a man of your talents. This piece of art almost brought me to tears. It was THAT moving. I showed it to Tony Baxter. And he wanted to make it a space mountain overlay for Christmas. The narrow escape of Mickey and Minnie from the terror that is Goofy's Bowels is a good representation of modern day life. Truly amazing.

Thanks a lot ! I was waiting for you to make a new lemon for so long ! Really nice job !

Ooooh, I love it, I love it, I love it! Thank ya so much! I love how you kept Goofy interacting with the mice every now and then and ffffffffffffff its just all so perfect and YAY a little bit of doggy style! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU!.