This is one of the worst fan fictions. How does a random person just magically become friends with the main protagonists? Sounds like you're pretty thirsty to me.

This is disgusting and this is a crime worse than the holocaust! Ugh

Nice!

Great-grand kids. Laxus' dad is Ivan (I think)

Omg! that was an amazing fanfic! thx 4 sharing!

I loved it bro! Its a great ending to a great story line and I can't wait to read more of your fics!

I'll copy my comment here;

I just read up to 3rd chapter but I have to say... You really have a very nice writing style compared to other authors. Most authors create OCs but they did not take time to think about its characterization. That's why most readers dislike OCs. I was one of them. But you had a good base on it, not just creating someone out of nothing just to fawn over your fave. You have an OC with a plot and you develop them in a very perfect harmony. You gave a great setting and emenated a great FT aura in the guild. I like how everyone acted differently towards the OC and how they accept her. And you added some knowledge contents which is really good. Some authors write fics only with some mushy FT quotes and a very very OOC characters and it's really not interesting.

I think you're a great writer all in all... Dont get discourage about the number of reviews, people are missing out a great fic and it's their loss. Most people prefer reading love stories of their OTPs and care less about plots which is sucks I know. And like I said earlier, most people dislike OCs, so it's a big gamble there. I think it's probably why but like I said, it's their loss. But hey, you pulled it off very perfectly. Give yourself a pat on your back for a job well done.

Off to next chapter

I don't want this to end QwQ
This chapter was so perfect! I absolutely loved it!
I really hope that you will be writing more n.n

This is definitely one of my favorite fics c:
Pleaseeee update soon! I can't wait to see how Laxus reacts when Ember goes home :3

Wow. This is such a nice story. The fight scene and everything is very well written. U have gain a new fan today! Keep up the awesome work!

I love your story bro, it gets better with every chapter!

OMG,That cliffy! You get more awesome with every chapter!

Haha, you're a great writer. She did well in her battle, and she has connection to Zeref. I wonder what else is in her past.
Man, I forgot to mention this in the other chapter. I was planning to write a fanfic with my OC having a dog like companion that can come from her object. Oh well. I should've know I wasn't the only one.

I could be wrong in the Ember X Laxus. Oh well. A bit of advice. When your going to a next scene put some kind of mark. For example I always put a -o- going to the next scene. Let's see how Natsu and Ember work together,

Know I REALLY want to know what happens next!