| Reviews for Demonic War |
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Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2014 Really entertaining! It's going well so far. Can't wait for more! XD |
GaaraLove4-ever chapter 3 . 6/21/2014 This is awesome! I can't wait for more! :) |
shameful shameful past chapter 3 . 6/21/2014 Teehee. I'm interested in how this is going to work. It would be kinda obvious if SAKURA tried to seduce him, so is she going to henge, or dye her hair, or will it be someone else entirely? And what about that blackmail, huh? So much excitement! Kisses, Isis Rose |
SuperKirschbluete chapter 3 . 6/21/2014 sounds interesting plase keep going on. can t wait till the next chapte |
kylie555 chapter 3 . 6/21/2014 Haha! The best cant wait to read more |
shameful shameful past chapter 2 . 6/11/2014 Why-why the hell DOES he have her underwear? |
OTP-addict chapter 2 . 5/25/2014 Whaaa... This is interesting. Lol I wanna know why Kiba has her underwear xD Update soon? :) |
Rishmi77 chapter 2 . 5/24/2014 it needs more details but it's an ineresing story. |
OTP-addict chapter 1 . 5/23/2014 Sounds really interesting. I'm in love with fanfics where Sakura doesn't forgive Sasuke right away when he returns, so this seems like just my thing ;D And the preview is both intriguing and slightly confusing, but it makes me want to read more! |
afanwhoreads chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 I can't see Sasuke just starting up a normal relationship with Sakura or anyone, and Karin he stabbed just to deal a wound to Danzo. This guy has no romantic life in the series... It's all been one-sided so far... I'm not saying we wouldn't love to see these two hook up, but keep to the existing story arc: Sasuke never gave a damn for Sakura, or so it seemed at the time. The only time he really showed interest, it was Naruto pretending to be his teammate, and his goodbye the night Sasuke ended up leaving the leaf for Orochimaru's training... But maybe he sees something he always missed or realizes he had feelings. Still, the way he'd go about it would be different. How about you start with Sasuke coming to Naruto or his old sempai for some love advice? Let me tell you a story to give you an idea what it must be like for him: As a teen I was crushed on by a lot of girls and lots of guys were jealous, but I didn't know that! When I looked at a pack of girls, they would whisper and giggle: So I thought they were laughing at me! Guys I barely knew were all being jerks and I got in a lot of fights before finally leaving the school. A girl told me years later the truth of things... You see how I misunderstood everything? At the very least, the same seems to have happened to this character (assuming he cared at all) so please give some thought to how Sasuke would reconcile his romantic life that is currently non-existent. Hope this helps and keep up the good work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 This looks interesting. I look forward to the upcoming chapters. |
Griffinbeak chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 good start...i'm waiting for more... |