its so good huhu

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Hi hello I hope you get sakura out of this hell

WHY DID YOU STOP!

The fact that Sakura may not be able to escape life-long abuse and rape is frightening. I want her to ran away from it and be safe but considering most of your stories are Dark with sad or bittersweet endings, I doubt she'd be able to, like the ending of one of your other story Entropy. She did escape torture in that fiction in a way, but even then her abuser, Madara managed to follow her. Sure, he didn't torture her anymore for the rest of her life, but then he stole her again from a peaceful death which was possibly the only way she could escape that bloody psychopath. It was a well-written dark fiction.
I haven't read The Kill. The fact that Sakura's desire to live survive surprises me. By the time I was reading chapter 15, I thought she would die, because there was only one more chapter left and you had marked it complete. lol. I feel you have potrayed her as mentally strong person. That's the only reason she hasn't commited suicide yet. She has guessed that Madara doesn't have any intention of allowing her to continue her studies like she wants to. She guessed he won't deny it to her outwardly, but would possibly manipulate and sabotage her career chances slowly... which seems exactly like something he would do. At one point when Sasuke refused to believe her, I felt if I had been in her situation, I would probably go back to my father and try to run away from the country. But then I remembered Madara's social position and power. By the end of the day, Sakura would only endager her Father's life as well as well as captured again. Sounds hopeless. Still... Sakura dying early, fighting for better life even if in poverty sounds better than her submitting to for life-long torture and trapped while her esteem gets destroyed every single day. Summary, Madara is just evil in this story and deserves karma. Lol. From a reader's perspective, in my opinion, it would be satisfying to see his empire collapse and him being persecuted. I mean, other than rape and abuse, the fact that was able to freeze Kakashi's bank accounts, made Sakura's university suspend her on just whim hints bribe and corruption. lol. If you ever decide to continue this story, I just hope Sakura gets the justice she deserves and is able to rest peacefully one day, even if its only on her death bed, thankfully Madara is no ninja here to be able to take away even that.
I hope you are well and all the best! It was a good read. Hope to read more. Bless you!

Please update ️

I hope you’re well. Hope you update one day ️

I don’t usually write reviews for a fanfic I read, because I feel like it would go unread. Though I have this idea I wanted to share. If you have watched The Good Place Season 2, the series devised a very clever way to bring a certain devilishly good character to communicate to his “supposed prisoners”/friends to defy the inevitable and escape. /vjnTmcitsws If not I’ll just summarize my thoughts.

Assuming Madara isn’t aware of all the details of her life events that she experienced with her father, Sakura can use it to her advantage when she does have the time to face him and speak to him for casual convo. Drop subtle clues and hints through the means of changing up certain details which he can use as a way to piece together a vague idea of what is really happening to his daughter (because the Sakura he knows would never forget certain details).

Anyways that’s all I got.

You are mentally disturbed to be writing fantasized rape scenes. Oh healing love, you probably got hurt by a twisted man like Madara and you are still in love with him that is why you are doing this. I am not reading this

So glad that you decided to continue this story. I loved The Kill so much. You made this dtory better with changes. Continue please.

How dare he throw shade at Micy D's that way

Loving it so far, can't wait for the next update.

This is turning out to be such a great story. Madara’s hinges is loose and I feel so bad for Sakura. Personally, I would’ve accepted the offer the first time. I noticed that Usaki hasn’t been by the house to he get let go?

I’m eager for an update to see how this all pans out! ️

Ugh, that would’ve been the perfect opportunity to snap his neck! We would’ve had to sleep in separate rooms after getting married.

Also, I wonder what’s the backstory with Ume and why she can never get married or don’t have children? It can’t be because she’s a lesbian right? Or did she sign one of those contracts too?

Honestly, I would’ve seriously been contemplating suicide.