This was lovely, truly. It wasn't OOTP and it was just honest with its awkwardness between Julia and James. And I'm glad there wasn't a big, dramatic kiss to signify their coming together.

It was simply lovely x

EEEEP! Cute! I know you said this story was done, but do you think you could write a story of what happened between the food fight and the end of the story?

Please keep writing
You are do good!

Please update again soon.

Ooo drama! Can't wait to see what happens next, please update again soon!

I love this story! I feel bad for Julia though :(...and James is being a real jerk just making assumptions like that. Update soon please!

This story is amazing! I love how sauce James is! Keep going!

I really like this story I think it is coming along great! can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it, really like it :3 it's sweet and lovely :) keep writing

Really good, although I don't like James being called simple-minded...

I like it. Thanks.

Dear TheSummerNightingale,

I really like the way you started this story. I think the way you are writing it is a nice technique and it's going to end up great.

I really enjoy this generation too. I'm reading a fanfiction at the moment about Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasly. It's called "Night Forest". You should go and check it out.

The way you wrote this chapter really intrigued me and I would know; I'm a writer myself. If you keep writing like this it will be a brilliant story. Maybe you could try doing double POVs. The story I'm reading does that and it works really well. This style is great as well though, so if you want you could just stick with that.

Anyway, keep writing well.

Cheers Emily