I just read this entire story today... ugh! I can hardly wait for next chapter...

Crazy ending; can’t wait to read the sequel

Okay I was a little worried that somehow you were going to break Leonard and Penny up and put her with Jake but that ending was a big surprise. I hope you update soon because that was a big cliffhanger.

Wow, you're so mean. You throw out that bomb and left us stranded with our hands in our pockets. Man, ya gotta luv cliffhangers! GREAT JOB!

Nice chapter

Still a lot going on in this story, I really feel for Leonard and how helpless he feels, but maybe both him and Penny can relax a little now that Noah is in custody. Penny has gone through a lot these last few chapters so hopefully Leonard and their family can help her through emotionally concerning everything that has happened. Also maybe Anna being pregnant, meaning Jake will be a grandfather, and Joy will give Jake a new purpose in life, he seems to need one to get over this obsession he has over Penny, which I still think is unhealthy. Finally, another cliffhanger, who is this mystery girl Lauren and what does she want, I guess I’ll have to wait till the next chapter to find out.

Well, your story like Raj's gravy thic-kens. Great job, Can't wait for Chapter 16.

Oh wow! This is so good it screams out for a sequel or at least a one chapter wrap up. I've never much cared for Jake. As someone who has worked in healthcare for decades I know that calling Penny 'sweet heart' and other endearments in the first story was wildly inappropriate for a health worker and enough to have him disciplined or put under heavy supervision. His blurring of boundaries directly caused his clients emotional pain and confusion. The thing that has kept me from completely dismissing him is that he's quite a tragic figure. Luke he said, you can't help who you fall in love with but you can decide whether to act on those feelings and become a home wrecker and he has conscience enough to resist. I admire hin for that.

That was a surprise ending and also a big cliffhanger on what happened to Jake. I’m assuming you are going to have a sequel to this story, at least I hope you are so we know what happens to everyone as a result of Jake getting shot. I liked the story but I’m not a big fan of Jake because I see him as almost a stalker that has in his mind that he deserves to be with Penny instead of Leonard, in a way he reminds me of Kurt. Anyway thanks for sharing this story and I’ll be looking for what you write next.

I keep thinking back to Joy in the show, she was a real character, I wonder what will happen next between her and Jake, if anything, or will Jake hearing her story somehow heal him. Leonard is right, Penny will probably love having her daughter there as long as they want to be there which it seems they do.

Nice set of chapters

This "ending" SCREAMS for an epilog. We are all standing with our lighters in hand calling out ENCORE! There are so many loose ends. Did Jake Die? Will Noah get away? Will he now stalk Penny? Will Penny take the movie? Will Leonard LET Penny take the movie? Will this tear apart their marriage? How will this affect Grace and Bobby? One more chapter to settle our minds please.

Noooooo. Totally unexpected. need an epilogue

Wow, that was wow. I definitely never saw that coming. Jake saved Penny and Maddie. What a great, wonderful chapter.

Wonderful chapter. All the Hofstadters under the same roof one more time. Jake appears to have his hands full. Can't wait to see what happens next.