This story turned terrible in part 2.
I don't know what was worse. The 4 year time jump, what happened before the time jump, Emma's whole character remained awful and 4 year time jump was useless and wasted on her she only got more irritating (her only redeeming quality is Henry), but what was the worst was Killian falling for another woman? Really? What is the purpose of real love story if one side moves on quickly and finds love with another person. It was different in canon with Milah being the first and Emma coming later so you can see the difference but the other way around is terrible.
Now their connection or whatever I can't even call it love looks even weaker and more shallow and their reuinon and everything that followed was so bleak so far
Ugh I can't believe I wasted my time reading 13 chapters of this crap

Well done
This story was so Good and so sattisfying

Even though i realized right away that I'd read this a while back, I just couldn't resist rereading it again! And damn if it wasn't even better this time around!

Wow, I didn't get to read this when you first published it for some reason - I don't know why, but after seeing it on tumblr the other day decided to have a read. I read the whole thing on a Saturday afternoon and it blew me away. I loved every chapter. Thanks for such a great story. Great job.

HOLY CRAP IT'S HENRY. I did not see that coming but I love it so much. Killian took Henry in! Ahhhhhh this is the best plot twist ever!

Woah that was quite the surprise. What in the world could Neal want?

We got an I love you and a daddy I'm over the moon!

Woah this was quite the twist. I love it!

Nooooooo they're seperated! But at least she let him go. And now she looking for her son. Go Emma! Bring Rumple down.

Ahhhh she kissed graham and everything is wrong now. I love it! Angst is beautiful :)))

He saved her! That was absolutely adorable! I'm so happy with the progress in this story :D

Ooooh she slapped him! The domesticity is cute, but I'm loving the power play.

Lol it really is a quarter truth. I don't care so long as she and Killian continue to have fun. Ha! Feelings are starting to get involved :)

Awww little Killian had his first time! That was so cute.
Yes! Get rid of that ponytail!

This is going to be awesome! I'm loving their dynamic so far.