Hi there.

Such a great job showing something the show skipped over: Emma's mixed feelings about her brother. At the same time you weave it in to canon so well that it reads like it actually could have happened "behind the scenes." (Most storylines that address this issue end up becoming AU, which is fine, but it's nice to see that it could have happened in canon, too.)

You also do such a great job showing Mary Margaret and David's pain and love for Emma, which is great. (A lot of people who address Emma's jealousy about her brother have Snowing be "the bad guys," and I don't think that's right.)

So sweet! This warmed my heart. Great job.

all i can say is that...mygod TT *cries in the corner with sappy feels*

Beautiful story and very well written.

Loved, loved, loved this!

So sweet and lovely! I loved reading all about Emma's observations and the moments between all of the Charmings were adorable.

This story was perfect.

This story was absolutely perfect.

you should write one where emma breaks down and charming is there for her

Very nice

That was beautiful.