Just finished after giving the last chapter a few days to germinate, the epilogue was a great final stretch.

Loved this story! All I can say is thank you for your time and commitment, this was a joy to read, and had a beautiful send off.

Laughing my ass off that this story has all-caps trigger warnings at the top of every chapter for what is pretty mild kink, but doesn't bat an eye at casually dropping a stillborn baby in. Unreal.

Fucking morons. What a shit ending to a fic'.

I'm gonna admit, I read this for the plot, lol, and it was emotional, angsty, fluffy, dramatic, and lovely, a wild ride, but one I for sure enjoyed!

Quite a twist on the usual Elsanna scenario, and a good read. Smut aplenty, and well written, with just enough layering of plot on top to keep it tense.

Please, get in contact with Badshipper, I'm friends with her and she really wants you to talk about this fic with you because of the chapter 10.

I read all your completed frozen stories, and I was enjoying this one so far, but I felt that in this chapter you threw the characters in the garbage and I'm not sure if I'll continue reading this story, ended diagonal reading most of this chapter.
Not because of the whipping, but because of the reason for whipping. This all implies trust, and Elsa was definitely scared, upseting Anna or not, it was use safeword right away. It needs to be consentual, and it wasn't, anna was using her right to be upset to coherce elsa into submiting for her, while you show no regret at all from Anna, no concerns whatsoever, which is for me what really difers from the other chapters. You simply can't justify whipping a person because you're upset with them.
Please dont take this personally though, you can write what you want, and I'm grateful that you do, and I know that I dont have to read it, I guess that I'm more upset at the characters if that makes any sense?
Sorry for the long review, I hope you're having a nice Holiday and have a great new Year.

I can't believe you have to ruin such a beautiful story with such a cruel idea. You are souless, man. Just change that shit for cry out loud

daaaaamn this one helluva story, love it

Elsa would have used her power of creating live to bring the baby back to live!

Um, Elsa would not be doing any work anymore. Elsa would be listening to what Anna is saying to her. So change it!

Elsa would likely have created a child using sperm from Anna and then would have combined that with her power to create life. The baby would be really in two weeks.

Cheating! Elsa is cheating on her! Where's this back up plan to run away!? I don't see it!? They should have runned to the ice palace by now!

Anna would be with her at that meeting.

They should be having meetings together!